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Review of chapter "In Which the Immortal Four Get Suspicious...er" from Elleria
Review:
This is great, very funny. Looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
There is only one more bit, but is should be interesting.
I'm really glad you liked it and thanks for the review.
@lice
Review By [Elleria] • Date [6 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Which the Immortal Four Get Suspicious...er" from LordCorwin
Review:
Nicely done and I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! It was a hoot to write Anya being sneaky and covert, because she sucks at that. But I loved her, she was great. Thank so much for the FB,
@lice
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which the Immortal Four Get Suspicious...er" from PATM
Review:
Next to last chapter?! I'm telling you Anya deserves more than this.
Comments from author:
Anya is great, but this is a small story that just popped into my head when I read the challenge. I'm glad you're enjoying this, but unless I get a random plot bunny, there will only be one more chapter.
@lice
Review By [PATM] • Date [14 Apr 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Which the Immortal Four Get Suspicious...er" from Infinix
Review:
While Anya has never been my favorite character done properly she is a great addition to any story and this certainly is done right.
Comments from author:
*Grins*
Thank you, I'm glad you think I'm writing her well.
@lice
Review By [Infinix] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Which the Immortal Four Get Suspicious...er" from vMures
Review:
I'm really enjoying this. I chuckled quite a bit over the immortal fours speculation, and adored the Dawn/Anya interaction. I am saddened that they will only be one more chapter. Hopefully we'll get a sequel?
Comments from author:
Right now, I can't imagine a sequel. If I ever get the inspiration to do more, I will, but as of now, no more.
Sorry, but thank you so much for the feedback!
@lice
Review By [vMures] • Date [10 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which the Immortal Four Get Suspicious...er" from tealruby
Review:
I have to say I'm not a Highlander fan, but this is a fun read. Nicely done!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it despite your fandom preferences. Thanks so much!
@lice
Review By [tealruby] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which the Immortal Four Get Suspicious...er" from Bumpkin
Review:
I soo love the befuddled immies trying to figure out where they know Anya from - and when they figure it out - whooo ain't that gonna be a kick in the pants *g* Men back in days of yore weren't the nicest to the ladies as a matter of course were they? Looking forward to the next part :D

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Comments from author:
See, I think my way for them all to have met is kind of strange and funny, so I'm excited to write the end when I get a chance. There shall be chaos! Sweet, sweet chaos!!
Thanks so much for your review *hugs*
@lice
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which the Immortal Four Get Suspicious...er" from Gaeriel
Review:
I love this story. I'm glad that finally someone from Anya's Sunnydale past knows she's alive. I can't wait for the last installment!
Comments from author:
Yes, the last installment shall be joyous, and a bit weird. I'm so happy that people like this story, and thank you so much for the feedback.
@lice
Review By [Gaeriel] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which the Immortal Four Get Suspicious...er" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
These 4 immortals are so paranoid it is funny. all worried about Anya and they know she knows the slayer so if she was evil she would have been killed by the slayer, so is it just curiosity or are they really that paranoid? I loved the dance Anya did and that Dawn said what is was. LOL I don't read many non Buffy centered stories but this one is a hoot.
Comments from author:
I think it's mostly curiosity on their part, and maybe a smidge of paranoia on Duncan's part. He knows that he's met her, but can't remember where from. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. Thanks for the FB!
@lice
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which Anya Makes a Friend" from litmouse
Review:
A good Anya story is a rare and wonderful thing, you are rendering her nicely, and the x-over feels quite natural. Good work, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad it works for you. It's fun, but I'm getting impatient with revealing Anya's previous experiences with the immortals, just because it's fun. But it is not yet time, unfortunately.
Will update within the next few weeks.
Thanks for the FB,
@lice
Review By [litmouse] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which Anya Makes a Friend" from CedarPineSpruce
Review:
Great new chapter. Love the pacing and Anya's voice.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much.
More to come, thanks for the FB
@lice
Review By [CedarPineSpruce] • Date [17 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Which Anya Makes a Friend" from ElaineRhodes
Review:
I'm so glad Anya has a friend who loves money & wealth as much as she does! I'm wondering if Amanda will recruit Anya to help out in a heist.

And next chapter, enter Dawn. Can't wait!
Comments from author:
Probably not; Anya would demand too much of a percentage. But they'll have good times together.

Thanks so much for the FB
@lice
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [17 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which Anya Makes a Friend" from Specks
Review:
Woo hoo! Update! And yay Dawnie. You've handled this bit of exchange quite well (Anya knowing Amanda's fence and buying from him was priceless) and the potential for oodles of fun has me rubbing my hands together Montgomery Bernes style. Can't wait to see how you write Dawn and I'm still waiting on that explanation for Anya looking familar.

I've got a shiny nickel waiting for you if you hurry to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Oh yes, the explanation is coming, it will come. But as much as I want to write it, it isn't the right time yet. But it will come. Just, you know, first I've got to work on some other stories.
Thanks much for the lovely FB. *rubs hands together*
It was... eeeeeexcellent.
@lice
Review By [Specks] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which Anya Makes a Friend" from Bumpkin
Review:
Heh, still loving this series... love the way that Anya stuns and confuses the two immortals in the store there with her version of Sunnydalian babble - and then of course her religion of capitalism was well showcased :) Can't wait to see the upcoming ruckus :)

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Comments from author:
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

The chaos. THE CHAOS!!!!
*coughs*
Glad you're still digging it. Thanks for the FB
@lice
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [15 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Which the Immortal Four Get Confused" from Bobboky
Review:
this is pretty much awesome and i look forward to reading more
Comments from author:
*grins*
Thanks, there is more on the way. At some point. I hope.
@lice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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