Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

Hell's Knight, Dark Guardian

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Lingering Embers and a Choice" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Excellent start. I'd suggest running through that night
before jumping this far forward tho'.
Comments from author:
Well, Halloween has been done to death.

Glad you liked it.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [17 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lingering Embers and a Choice" from wraiths
Review:
This is good I hope you update soon and I think that starting the story after Halloween gave it an original flair. Please update soon and many thanks for the story.
Comments from author:
I appreciate that. I like doing original and unusual things with my stories.
Review By [wraiths] • Date [17 Feb 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lingering Embers and a Choice" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lingering Embers and a Choice" from murdock
Review:
great start keep it up.
Comments from author:
Will see where the road takes this one.
Review By [murdock] • Date [17 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lingering Embers and a Choice" from Sio
Review:
So cool! I can't wait to see the gang's reaction to the new and improved Xander...and before I forget...UPDATE!!!!
Comments from author:
Updates come as I can get ideas down, as any writer can appreciate :D

Glad you like it.
Review By [Sio] • Date [17 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lingering Embers and a Choice" from OrneryFife
Review:
I kinda wondered whose muse would be first use the movie to jump-start a story into gear. Though a bit short, it's a good start, (or maybe I'm just greedy for more). Anxious to see where you go with this. Curious as to how you'll handle the dynamic between 'Mephisto' and 'The First'.
Update frequently.
Comments from author:
Will see how that goes. The First has a few years before it makes its big play.

As for it being short, it was written in about 20 min (could have been a challenge), using a lot of stuff direct from the movie. I have to work out the consequences of his choice and the changes to make.

Thanks. Am glad you like it.
Review By [OrneryFife] • Date [16 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lingering Embers and a Choice" from Greywizard
Review:
Very good, very succinct and an excellent insight into Xander's point of view. Feeds very strongly into his protective aspect.

Great job, man.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the help. See the movie. (Free advertizing for it right here)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [16 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lingering Embers and a Choice" from Ceallach
Review:
Hmmm. very interesting. I haven't read Ghost Rider in years so I don't remember a lot about it but this looks really promising. Can't wait to see where you go with it.
Comments from author:
Saw the movie, and it had to be written. There will be more.
Review By [Ceallach] • Date [16 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
start back Page: 3 of 3
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking