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Review of chapter "Talking Turkey" from Brightly
Review:
woohoo! hot wes/faith action finally!

that's all i wanted to say really
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you approve. As you can see the rose petals and pink candles didn't happen, but it is the first copulating of the most twisted Slayer and Watcher of the twenty first century so far, being described after all.
Review By [Brightly] • Date [22 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Talking Turkey" from SilverWave
Review:
This is just getting better and better.

Thanks :)
Comments from author:
Well thank you, I'm glad you're still enjoying the story.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [22 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rose of Clare" from Brightly
Review:
i adore the first bit about the demon cult conflicts. willow has some serious issues, and is kinda starting to creep me out, which is hopefully your intention. and i have to ask are wes and faith ever going to get together?
Comments from author:
Funny you should say that about Wes and Faith, because my Beta commented on the very same thing, and if you don't want to be spoiled stop reading now.

I have just finished writing their tender first love making, complete with burning, pink candles for romantic illumination, as they worship one anothers bodies, and rose petals scattered on the carpet, to trail the path to the heart-shaped, king sized water bed, where they consumate their love. Er, it's a bit like that anyway.

Willow, well it is a horror story. So I'm pleased you're creeped out or maybe you're just nauseated? I say, go for it Willow!

Thank you very much for reviewing.
Review By [Brightly] • Date [20 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Love, Sex and Zombies" from (Current Donor)kribby
Review:
Oh and by the way-
reading this made my day!

Days, weeks, months passed--
hating your writing--the dead hand of the past

I don't get you--
but that's okay
You drink a strange brew
but your grammar no longer dismays.
Comments from author:
"I don't get you--
but that's okay"

Don't be thick
I'm slightly sick

"Days, weeks, months passed--
hating your writing--the dead hand of the past"

Inspired by your truth telling I struggled with prose
The loathsome commas, where of where, do they goes?
I proof read repeatedly, my operas of soap.
But of getting them perfect, I hadn't a hope.
But light came into my life, with this tale.
A beta is helping me out. R, Smythe all Hail.

Thank you kindly for your review
May the ptb sincerely bless you
Review By [(Current Donor)kribby] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Happy Anniversary Baby: Part Two" from Brightly
Review:
so yeah with the entertaining. especially buffy and faith. and i feel faith's frustration with not getting any wes action.
Comments from author:
"i feel faith's frustration with not getting any wes action". Because you're naturally empathic, or drooled when wardrobe suggested Alexis Dennisoff take off the glasses and grow the stubble?

"buffy and faith" I think they are both naturally het, apart from their clear attraction to each other. (I don't see them ever acting on it, unless very drunk and then they'd feel really weird the next day)Which makes me wonder if they'd experience or any of the other new slayers would experience the same UST. On the other hand we never saw it with Buffy and Kendra, so maybe it is solely a Faith Buffy chemistry thing.

Thank you very much for your kind review.
Review By [Brightly] • Date [11 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Happy Anniversary Baby: Part One" from redrikki
Review:
I've been following this story for a while now, but I just had to comment after this chapter. So damn funny. I love how you've mixed and subverted canon relationships and events while still keeping true to everyone's character.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you are liking the story so far. Happy to share it with you.
Review By [redrikki] • Date [9 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Happy Anniversary Baby: Part One" from Brightly
Review:
well this has the potential to be far more entertaining that even tabula rasa
Comments from author:
thank you very much for the pressure I am now under, to be more entertaining than T.R. Thanks for the review ;]
Review By [Brightly] • Date [9 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday Blues" from Brightly
Review:
very very interesting. good to see fic with oz. far too many btvs authors have forgotten him. not familiar with gingersnaps but doesn't affect enjoying the story. looking forward to seeing what you do with it.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your review. I like Oz. He's hard to write dialog for, as what would he be like at twenty three? I always wanted to write a pairing with him and Ginger.

Check out the Gingersnaps Website for info on Gingersnaps.

http://www.ginger-snaps.com/
Review By [Brightly] • Date [8 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday Night's Alright" from PATM
Review:
This series just gets better, some of the best elements of other stories I've read
given the right mixing. So I gush, it's because love Buffy.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review, 'some of the best elements of other stories I've read' I'm unsure how to take that. Everyone else screwed it up? I plagarise? You're a Wes/Faith shipper who also always wanted to see a pairing with Ginger/Oz?

But I can tell you like this story and I'm really pleased to share it with you.
Review By [PATM] • Date [7 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moonstruck" from Infinix
Review:
Good work, the dialogue was a bit cleaner and easy to follow. There are still a few rough spots, the paragraph saying that Faith wasn't impressed by the were a big example. Still an improvement and you have done an excellent job showing a Dawn that didn't grow up as a Summers but in the harsher life of Faith.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review, I am trying.

You found the wasn't impressed paragraph in Moonstruck hard to follow eh? I shall think it over and rewrite it. Thank you for being so specific.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [7 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moonstruck" from eponine
Review:
Sweetness.
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [eponine] • Date [6 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moonstruck" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
I read this really fast, sort of feel like I have whiplash. I really like the rythym and flow of the story even though the progression of the story is a little fast. It's not really a bad thing, because there are tons of fics who take forever to get somewhere. I'll keep reading if you keep writing! Thanks-
Comments from author:
"the progression of the story is a little fast" many people comment about that about my stories, sigh. (And I try and remember to put in extra detail too, I have so long to go to get good). Apart from one reviewer once, who asked me what the point of my DA/Btvs crossover was and where was it going.

"there are tons of fics who take forever to get somewhere" see I have a lot of plot to cover before we get to the Boston gang (can't be the Scoobie gang exactly) have the ultimate confrontation with Glorificus and Faith dies to save the world, or she or Wes cut's Dawn's throat to save the world. (Never can tell with those two) or Buffy saves the day and makes Faith feel hideously inadequate.

So I'm relieved to hear you'll keep reading if I keep writing, I love reviews that say that. Thank you very much for yours.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets" from Infinix
Review:
I am not usually a fan of fics that drop right in whith canon being largely rewritten but this seems like an interesting idea. The dialogue could use a bit of fixing because in places it feels choppy and doesn't flow right. Interested in seeing where you take this because there seems to be a rather large convergance of interconnected characters.
Comments from author:
"The dialogue could use a bit of fixing because in places it feels choppy and doesn't flow right" thank you for such a constructive comment. I shall go back over it. I always try and make dialog actually how people talk, but I want people to be able to understand it easily too.

Thank you very much for your review.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secrets" from SilverWave
Review:
Wow that was different :D

In a good way!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your review happy to share my story with you.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [4 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secrets" from (Past Donor)MetropolisRising
Review:
This is a great fic. I've been a fan of Ginger Snaps for a long time, so it was nice seeing a potentially plausible reason for why the girls could have made it out alive. All in all great crossovers through out, as well as great reasoning as to why Willow and Xander would be in Boston. Surprising (maybe not so much though) how much of a mega bitch you've made Faith in this...I guess not being out of her element kinda let her stay ingrained in her old ways and while I do think that Dawn is a pain, you've kept them both true to character for the time frame they're in...plus the fact that it'll all get shaken up pretty soon should be interesting. The nine in the revie score is only because the fic is unfinished, otherwise it's fantastic, please keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thank you for such a nice review. Great to have a Gingersnaps fan on board.

Faith a mega bitch, Dawn a pain, they're my heroines how can you say that? I love those characters. (lol)
Review By [(Past Donor)MetropolisRising] • Date [4 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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