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Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from littleoldme
Review:
This is a totally innovative twist, and your Veronica voice is pitch perfect. I love that you've imported parts of Veronica's life into the Buffyverse (and that Lamb is one of them! hah!), and that Veronica's seen Buffy, so she knows what to expect. Please, please update soon.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Interesting. Your Veronica voice is very good. I would love for this to continue, to figure out how she'll fit in without affecting too much and sending the universe spinning out of control. What, if anything, will she not let happen. There's got to be things in the next six years she doesn't accept, like Tara's death or Buffy's swan dive or Angelus or something. I'll definitely be tracking.

There a few typos or spelling errors, but your writing style, your flow, is very good.

Thanks!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from DigiEmissary
Review:
This has the potential to be an absolutely amazing fic. Please, please, please continue - The Sum of Their Parts has already shown your aptitude at inserting new characters into canon.
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from khimeraus
Review:
oh, no...star trek or VMars...? I really embarrassed now.
Can you make both? Or maybe a ST/VMars/BtVS xover?
Review By [khimeraus] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from Sadie
Review:
Nice. You brought Lamb with them, thank you so much! I'm a little sad to see Veronica missing her own Scoobies. But, yeah, definitely an interesting idea. I look forward to more.
Review By [Sadie] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
Interesting start. Wondering how you are going to manage having Veronica know what is going to happen without affecting the actions of others.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from (Past Donor)MetropolisRising
Review:
Excellent setup. Sad to think that Cordy would have such skeevy parties, but in a fusion universe, who knows what could happen? Good Veronica voice, hoping that it sounds that great in dialog with others.
Review By [(Past Donor)MetropolisRising] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from mymatedave
Review:
Cool. Interesting start, I'd be interested in seeing more of this.
Review By [mymatedave] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Interesting...I shall track this to see how it goes.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from steph2
Review:
Okay, this has definately got me intrigued. Can't wait to see where you go with this. Veronica's narrative sounds right. Although, no Wallace, Mac or Weevil? Can I just hope that they turn up at some stage?

Great work so far!
Review By [steph2] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from UncleKai
Review:
Wow. Now this is an intresting concept. Want to see more of that.
Review By [UncleKai] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from Ishikawa
Review:
This definitely is something else for starters. So i definitely have to vote for continuing this story. Interesting setting with lots of possibilities.
Review By [Ishikawa] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from matthew
Review:
Huh. This is a bit of a new take on things. Could be interesting, but I wonder how quickly the butterfly effect will take over.
Review By [matthew] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Welcome to Hell" from Caira
Review:
In answer to your question: this one. Definitely. *breaks out popcorn*
Review By [Caira] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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