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Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from spk
Review:
This is becoming one of my favorite challenges. I like the "normal" way that you had Buffy and Sam meet, and I love the idea of a Buffy/Daniel pairing. Good start. Can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Comments from author:
It's one of my favorite challenges as well, probably why I decided to write a Buffy/Sam sister story to begin with. LOL. The next chapter should be up in a day or two ;)
Review By [spk] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
awesoem start! looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you like it. The next chapter should be up in a day or two ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from EricThorsen
Review:
Interesting opening... I loved the exploding engine, but I have a problem believing that any car rental place would be that lax with their maintenance. Personally I would have had Buffy forget to have the oil changed on their car... and poof, broken car.
Comments from author:
My main weakness is cars. LOL. I'm not a mechanical person. Not a technical one either. I just needed something to happen with the car, not explode though! LOL. That's not how I thought it out. Yeesh. LOL. Your option was much more believable I guess...oh well...next time ;)
Review By [EricThorsen] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Chaos
Review:
Great start! I can't wait to find out what happens. How is Sam going to react to Dawn?
Comments from author:
LOL. Glad you like it and to answer your question - that's for me to know and you to find out :P
Review By [Chaos] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Shadowcub
Review:
I love this challenge, even though the guys from SG1 make me sick, and Janet would be better for her, can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
LOL.
Review By [Shadowcub] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Toniboo
Review:
hey thos sounds good i like it so far please continue
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it, there should be an update in a couple of days ;)
Review By [Toniboo] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from hangmansgirl
Review:
great start...completely ramdom meetting...love it...what's next?..
>^.^<
Comments from author:
Glad you like it, I thought it would be kinda fun making it happen this way :)
Review By [hangmansgirl] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Annadel
Review:
A story with a good premise and a realistic way for them to meet. How refreshing!

However, there are quite a few grammatical errors. I'd suggest going through the chapter again, reading it out loud. It tends to help find those areas that don't work or have typos. Or, there's always going the beta route.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it.

Yeah, I know I have a few grammar problems. LOL. I'm doing my best to keep them away but my spelling program doesn't always catch them. A beta is a good idea. LOL.
Review By [Annadel] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from purrfus
Review:
Great beginning. Interesting meeting, and nice teasing cliffie ending.
Comments from author:
I just don't seem to be able not to write cliffies, but I thought a teaser would be nice now in the beginning ;)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from link
Review:
So far, you're doing ok. I'm interested to find out how you going to go with this story. Please continue this fic.
Comments from author:
I'm definitely gonna continue. I'm glad you like it!
Review By [link] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Tanydwr
Review:
Cool. It is a great premise. And the way you had them meet was just cool.
Buffy/Daniel, huh? I love that pairing. How is Sam going to feel when her 'little sister' starts flirting with Daniel?
Keep up the good work.
Lol, Tanydwr
Comments from author:
LOL. I'm a big fan of B/D as well, and I'm having a lot of fun writing this story :D
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from kiwi
Review:
ooh! really interesting start so far. can't wait for more. :)
Comments from author:
Glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [kiwi] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from raynee
Review:
looks pretty good so far
Comments from author:
LOL. Another chapter should be up in a couple of days ;)
Review By [raynee] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Twoboots
Review:
I love the premise of this challenge, but I hadn't yet seen it done in a way that left me satisfied. Until now. Thank you. Can't wait to see where you go with it.
Comments from author:
Since I technically chose not to follow the challenge guide lines I guess I have it a little easier to write it. LOL. I'm glad you like it!
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Past Donor)Anneliese
Review:
For your first fic, it's very well done (grammar, etc.). It's a unique concept on the whole sister thing and I can't wait to see more. I'm glad that you had Giles be the one who knew something was wonkey in the state of Colorado and that Buffy didn't get recruited/brought in by a character from Buffy now working at Stargate command/etc. Everyone does that, I like the way you did it, although I would like to know exactly how Giles knew.

Anyway, good job. I look forward to your next chapter. :)
Comments from author:
Actually it's not my FIRST fic, just my first fic within this fandom and I'm doing my best to make it good. LOL. Your questions should be answered as the story moves along though. I'm really glad you like it!
Review By [(Past Donor)Anneliese] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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