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Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Silver
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Argh! Another great story that I found... only yet again it hasn't been updated in forever!!!! The one pet peeve I have on this site. I think yoiu really niled the character of buffy and the confilct between tryin to protect her girls and answer hammond's questions. Why did Jacob/Selmak have such a cold look when he saw her after coming through the gate? was it Jacob or Selamk who had the reaction? (would be interesting if Slemak could somehow "sense " the Slayer essence). I would like to see more of disclosure to the sgc people - such as perhaps video/survellaince of the final battle at the Intiative base. Any how, the story is great,and I am very very disappointed that this hasn't been updated in over a year!!!! Come on!!! Please tell us you are still writing at least! I really think you should update soonest! Keep up the good work!
Review By [Silver] • Date [16 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from spk
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Just re-reading this story and hoping for more. I love the way you're approaching this challenge and would really like to see what you could do with it. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [22 Apr 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from SpacedCadet
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please update!

Please Update!!

PLEASE ***UPDATE***!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [9 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Arkaedia
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*poke, poke*

It's been a YEAR!

We miss you!
Review By [Arkaedia] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from FireWolfe
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so any chance of an update. I really like this piece. It be funny to see Sam be the one kidnapped instead of Dawn for a change.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [16 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from FireWolfe
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Do not sell yourself short. You are a very gifted writter. Yes there may be a point or two that could use polish or something but it is so minor one barely notices. You have woven a very interesting tale and I am eagerly awaiting an update. I love the characterizations and they are all true to form. Please update soon. This is to good of a fic to be left incomplete. I esspecially like that Riley did the right thing even if it was by accident. Love to see a Buffy Grahm pairing. Loved that character a lot. I always thought he would be more Buffy's type. Dawn would do well for Clone Jack I think. I would love to see a snippet where the president is talking about them getting access. I am sure he was not happy to be blackmailed into it lol.

Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from joshlamont
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:P You're taking too long to update. Write faster.

Seriously though, I'm enjoying what you've written so far. I don't care for some of the paths you've taken, but what you've done, you've done well. Wish I had some good critiques for you, but I don't do those well unless somebody sucks. Hope to see more!
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from nemogbr
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Looking forward to your next updates.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [15 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from TwoBlackDragons
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Please update soon.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from spacey
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i'm kinda in awe of this story right now. it's neat, yo [o:
Review By [spacey] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from ebony
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Please update soon cause I just gotta know what happens next and them you promised som Buffy/Daniel action. So update soon!
Review By [ebony] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from FireWolfe
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May we please have an update. It seems like all the good crossovers are n limbo now. I hate that the ones that are plausable are just hanging and all we get it the unbelivable one. So update pretty please with sugar on top.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from cryefourme
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I like your story as it has many points that go across the board. The whole one sided non disclosure thing is a great plus. And defiantly rankles certain feather's. If Earth is defiantly not ready to face life out there in space and look at what the military did with the existence of demons they defiantly do not need to know about SUPER HUMANS IE Slayers. What would happen then, even Sam would want to poke and prod one. (And get broken fingers in the process). The non disclosure forms should make there way out soon on Buffy's side of the table to stop SGC from researching anyone...
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [5 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from thesithspawn
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Great story, read it all in one sitting:)
Update soon please!
Review By [thesithspawn] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from burmafrdnow
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As regards arrogance.
How many millenia has the Slayer stood guardian for Mankind? Vs a few years for SG1 who frankly are fighting a foe that they created by starting it all while the Slayer fought a foe older then her.
Reality is that the Council and the Slayer Army simply are at a higher level then SG.
Now one bad thing about the story is SG1 not right away acknowledging that anyone with abilities above a normal human would ALWAYS be at risk from the NID. Considering how well the SG crew know NID and what they will do for any kind of an edge = that was probably the weakest part of the story outside of the very awkward way Buffy was acting.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [29 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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