i absurlutly loved the entire story no matter what some of the others say you did good and if any of your future fics are as good as this one ten i'm sure i'll like them as well. good work.
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [15 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I recently posted a review about someone taking the idea of two storylines, making everyone OOC, and it just not working.
When I started this story, I thought it was going to go the same way, but I was pleasantly surprised.
Yes, a good number of the characters were OOC. Some were very OOC.
Buuuttt....
You put in good detail about where in the story this was placed, you explained either in notes or the story itself where it was veering off, /and/ you kept the same voice throughout most of the story.
So, while it wasn't the best thing out there I've read with this meshing, I think you did a decent job over all, and will probably read the next story if I catch it.
Good luck!
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [15 Mar 07] • Not Rated
I just finished this story, and I've got to say I enjoyed it overall; not quite as free-flowing as it might have been, but still a worthy story to be on anyone's Author Resume. I very much hope you are writing other stories, and that they're at least half as good as this one! :)
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [15 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
OMG!!! you cant leave it there, update soon like NOW i dont think that i can wait till tomorrrow, i didnt see that ending coming. Great fic but update really quick...!!!!..........!!!!!!!11
Review By [SarahL] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
drdeth
