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Review of chapter "Forced Holiday (Buffy/Stargate)" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Buffy likes fishing? WOW, now that I think about it, of course she would like fishing. It's like Slaying but with a wait. Same gore and everything.

Oh, and did I mention, this story was HOT! Steamy, hot. And a lot of fun to read because I knew it was just a matter of time before Buffy got her way. (grin)

As for "real" feed back - I do like the little things you add that make your characters become people. I.E. The fishing idea, the way everyone plotted to get Daniel to take the vacation, and how B/D became so involved with each other that Buffy dropped her drink and didn't realize it.

Then there’s part where you don't forget things about the characters. I've discovered that's a big difference between the really wonderful stories and the good stories. You placed this story in the Hollow-verse so that anyone who read that story would know Buffy *really, really* doesn't like elevators! That helped her be more of a person, more three dimensional, than just a character on the page. You also helped make Daniel more real because in the Hollow-verse he tries to distract her in the – steel boxes of death – just like he did in this story.

Ok, this feed back is getting as long as the story so I will stop here:

BTW: Did I mention this story was – HOT!
Comments from author:
*giggles* I ladore your review love because that's exactly what it is, love.

Thank you for taking the time to tell me what you liked, what stood out for you and I'm so happy that you liked. I really don't think my smile could grow any wider at the moment and its all because you are so thoughtful and even if something is wrong you take the time to let me know (I.E. The Dead Lesbian Cliche) and that makes your praise all the more powerful.

Thank you.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Forced Holiday (Buffy/Stargate)" from DevJannz
Review:
I loved this little interlude. Your pairing of Buffy/Daniel is one of my favorites. I hope to see more in Hollow Places soon. Good work.
Comments from author:
My muse is slowly learning to like Stargate again and I'm hoping the new season will jump start her like it usually does.

As for Hollow Places I've finally hit the big fight scene and my muse is a blood thirsty little thing so I'm hoping the outlet of violence will endear her to the story again. But don't worry I haven't given up on her yet and I hope you don't either.

Thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [DevJannz] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To be Strong (Buffy/Faith/Stargate)" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
You are a tease with this little dribble,
Can I make your plot bunnies multiply like a tribble?

A separate post perhaps you should have done,
But then continuation requests would have arrived by the ton.

I did like this set up thought those episodes I have not seen,
And to not continue this would just be downright mean...

:-)
Comments from author:
You are far too good at this rhyming,
I'm a little afraid of your cuteness reviewing.

And just so we're clear,
Satyrn is the tease around here.

(Look what you made me do!)
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lust (Dawn/Supernatural)" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
Oh poor Dawnie, trapped by her sister,
If only she could sneak away to play a little "twister".

Sam would do her some good I do declare,
Even if he does have some crazy-ass hair.

:-)
Comments from author:
ROFLMAO!!!

Okay first, Dawnie playing twister? Is it naked twister and have jello shots been consumed?

Second, crazy-ass hair? So I'm not the only one that thinks Sammy needs a trim...not a lot taken off. Just a little to neaten it up a bit. Of course it'd be harder for him to look a pensive if he couldn't run his fingers through it while frustrated. I guess that means the crazy hair has to stay.
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wrath (Illyria/Supernatural)" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
Illyria only left behind a ruined jaw?
I thought "screw with Illyria = death" was a law...

Oh well, just goes to show I'm not that wise,
But Ellen's intuition tells her no lies.

:-)
Comments from author:
*snicker* There would have been more blood shed but there's only 200 words allowed in a drabble and her dismembering people would take up at least a 100. ;)
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To be Strong (Buffy/Faith/Stargate)" from Javian
Review:
Neat. Would love to see more of this.
Comments from author:
Thank you and I hope we can.
Review By [Javian] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To be Strong (Buffy/Faith/Stargate)" from spk
Review:
I am seriously hoping this chapter becomes a series because this is an ingenious idea. Would love to see what you could do with this. :)
Comments from author:
Once I kill off...er...free a few more plot bunnies I'll come back to this one. Until then there's many more Stargate ficlets to come.
Review By [spk] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To be Strong (Buffy/Faith/Stargate)" from Twoboots
Review:
I Love this!!! And now I need more! Please?
Comments from author:
LOL! I'll try and thank you!
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To be Strong (Buffy/Faith/Stargate)" from Lisette
Review:
Well, here's my vote for this eventually turning into a series - nice groundwork! You're also getting me excited for the return of Stargate... though after submersing myself in Farscape, it'll be interesting to see Mitchell and Vala and somehow NOT see John and Aeryn. Nice work!
Comments from author:
Farscape always made me laugh with all the puppets and outrageous costumes - good show though. I got you excited? Your fic got my muse to like Stargate again. I think that means we're feeding off each other. ;)
Review By [Lisette] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lust (Dawn/Supernatural)" from Lisette
Review:
*grins* Ah... don't we all wish we could be ravaged by Sam, even if just for a little while?
Comments from author:
I'm loving Dawn with Sam right now but I'm wondering who else I can pair with the tall hottie. *ponders*
Review By [Lisette] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To be Strong (Buffy/Faith/Stargate)" from katgurl
Review:
I think that this would make a great series. I love how you integrated both Buffy and Faith into this story. There's not enough stories where they are working together rather than working apart or as enemies. I hope you do turn it into a series, because I would love to read it!!
Comments from author:
I do love Faith and Buffy interaction it's always filled with banter fun. Plus my muse likes Stargate again so there is a very real chance of this being continued. Thank you for taking the time to review and letting me know what you liked.
Review By [katgurl] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To be Strong (Buffy/Faith/Stargate)" from velara
Review:
Well.. that was awesome. I hope this does turn into a series! I loved it!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [velara] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To be Strong (Buffy/Faith/Stargate)" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Really does need to be continued - please!
Comments from author:
We'll see how my muse feels about this plot line later and thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To be Strong (Buffy/Faith/Stargate)" from link
Review:
The last chapter is very intriguing. I would very pleased if you turned the drabble into a full length fics. The plot looks promising.
Comments from author:
Thank you and quite a few people agree with your assessment but my New Years resolution was to finish my existing WIP's before starting any more. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [link] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To be Strong (Buffy/Faith/Stargate)" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Oh children of Morgan Le Fay!
This one needs to continue!
Comments from author:
LOL! Glad you liked it and I'll try.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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