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Review of chapter "Chapter 3." from CPTSkip
Review:
Well, I think you cleaned up Sally's last line just a teeny tiny bit. Lol! In my previous spate of verbiage I should have said "Blue Sun" and not "Blue Star" for the guys with blue gloves. Cagney and Lacey? Oh, you are going to a Special Hell for that one. Lol!
Comments from author:
Its starting to get difficult to think up pairs of names for the evil Fed agents.

It could have been worse! The Swat team might have been on board; Hugh, Pugh, Barney McGrew, Cuthbert, Dibble and Grudge! OR; Dave, Dee, Dozey, Beeky, Mick and Tich, but I think that's going too far...don't you?

Me clean up lines? Never!!!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from CPTSkip
Review:
Yes! It is a double standard thing. Girls are sluts and boys will be boys attitude is just wrong. But it is good you had Willow remember not to eat the fish. Lol! I have finally come to the conclusion that your are a strange and off-putting man, but you can write some funny stuff. I can't wait for the snakes to show up. Or is the President hiding in the cargo hold? Or is there a falsely accused Army Ranger who was trained to fly helicopters being escorted by a Federal Marshall on board? So many movies, so many cliches! How do you decide. The guys in Willow's dream didn't work for Blue Star or the Centre or Section or ... did they? Guess we will have to wait and see. And Tara is a telekinetic witch all ready. Too Cool! There will be so much more trouble she can get into now. Poor Tara's Two Mommies. Lol!
Comments from author:
Blue Gloves...think 'Firefly'.

So many plot ideas! Thanks!!!

I think you'll find my solution to the problem...original!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
We are Rangers.
We walk in the dark places no others will enter.
We stand on the bridge, and no one may pass.
We live for the One, we die for the One.

Nice reference to The Anla'Shok of Babylon 5=).
And on a personal level, i would think twice to board a plane after all those warnings :S
See ya!
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The witch that was, Tara (The Elder) o mayhap it be... Janna Kalderash of the Kalderash Clan could be the claimers of the honorable title of the one that paved the road.

But the witch that will be, the one that comes to my mind, It's mayhap Tara the young.
That will come to be only, and only if, the calling of the ancient art of Hecate is further upon the road of her life; but, alas my friend, tis only it's a probability, a mere chance that maybe... nougth.

That is the domain of the unknown country, the future.

So, my rhyming review hat come to a timely end.
Long live the Bard from Stratford-upon-Avon =)!

See ya!
Comments from author:
Now, I bet you can guess who the 'Witch that is', is. But who is the 'Witch that will be' and 'the Witch that was'?

Boarding the plane? Think of it as a triumph of hope over experience!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
Surely they aren't going to get on the plane after all that?
^^^^ - edit: come on now, pay attention!
Comments from author:
Witches and Slayers rush in were others fear to tread!

Also it wouldn't have been much of a story if they'd said, "Oh lets go home now!"

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [13 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mackon
Review:
Looking forward to this its been awhile since we have had something that could be this funny . Hated the first paragraph. It sucked.
Comments from author:
Hated the 1st Paragraph? But you continued to read the fic, for which I say 'Thanks'.

If you'r worried about 'Buffy Bashing' it's not intended to be. It's just a continueing plotline from my earlier stories in this series.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mackon] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Oh, gods! :-) Yeah, *this* is going to get interesting!
Comments from author:
Well I sure hope you'll find it interesting.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngusH
Review:
I can hardly guess where this story is going to end up ...

It's getting off to a great start and I look forward to reading more
Comments from author:
Tell the truth I didn't know where it was going to end until I wrote it!

More on Wednesday.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [AngusH] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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