Well, I think you cleaned up Sally's last line just a teeny tiny bit. Lol! In my previous spate of verbiage I should have said "Blue Sun" and not "Blue Star" for the guys with blue gloves. Cagney and Lacey? Oh, you are going to a Special Hell for that one. Lol!
Comments from author:
Its starting to get difficult to think up pairs of names for the evil Fed agents.
It could have been worse! The Swat team might have been on board; Hugh, Pugh, Barney McGrew, Cuthbert, Dibble and Grudge! OR; Dave, Dee, Dozey, Beeky, Mick and Tich, but I think that's going too far...don't you?
Me clean up lines? Never!!!
All the best, DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Yes! It is a double standard thing. Girls are sluts and boys will be boys attitude is just wrong. But it is good you had Willow remember not to eat the fish. Lol! I have finally come to the conclusion that your are a strange and off-putting man, but you can write some funny stuff. I can't wait for the snakes to show up. Or is the President hiding in the cargo hold? Or is there a falsely accused Army Ranger who was trained to fly helicopters being escorted by a Federal Marshall on board? So many movies, so many cliches! How do you decide. The guys in Willow's dream didn't work for Blue Star or the Centre or Section or ... did they? Guess we will have to wait and see. And Tara is a telekinetic witch all ready. Too Cool! There will be so much more trouble she can get into now. Poor Tara's Two Mommies. Lol!
Comments from author:
Blue Gloves...think 'Firefly'.
So many plot ideas! Thanks!!!
I think you'll find my solution to the problem...original!
All the best, DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Not Rated
We are Rangers. We walk in the dark places no others will enter. We stand on the bridge, and no one may pass. We live for the One, we die for the One.
Nice reference to The Anla'Shok of Babylon 5=). And on a personal level, i would think twice to board a plane after all those warnings :S See ya! _______________________________________________________________________________ The witch that was, Tara (The Elder) o mayhap it be... Janna Kalderash of the Kalderash Clan could be the claimers of the honorable title of the one that paved the road.
But the witch that will be, the one that comes to my mind, It's mayhap Tara the young. That will come to be only, and only if, the calling of the ancient art of Hecate is further upon the road of her life; but, alas my friend, tis only it's a probability, a mere chance that maybe... nougth.
That is the domain of the unknown country, the future.
So, my rhyming review hat come to a timely end. Long live the Bard from Stratford-upon-Avon =)!
See ya!
Comments from author:
Now, I bet you can guess who the 'Witch that is', is. But who is the 'Witch that will be' and 'the Witch that was'?
Boarding the plane? Think of it as a triumph of hope over experience!
All the best, DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]