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Review of chapter "Animal I've become 4" from deusexsububi
Review:
You know, this isn't bad at all. First time I've seen anyone try top use Tara's father halfway positively. Could use more ninjas turtles though. :)
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Animal I've become 4" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Animal I've become 4" from AnimeRonin
Review:
Travers lived? Pity...

Good stuff.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Animal I've become 4" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Go! Tara, you rock. A Very Interesting twist on Tara & the Charmed Line. I Suspect the next time Xander meets Travers...Things will be ...Very Different. Refreshing take on Tara's Family, giving them a brain cell.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Tara's family always seemed a bit... wrong, like the produced grabbed a random stereotype and shoe horned them in to fit, i wanted to work on that a little bit.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Animal I've become 4" from Greywizard
Review:
I'm delighted to see another chapter of this show up, man. I really do like seeing more of this story, since it has so much potential ;-)

I hope it doesn't take nearly as long for another one, but I do know what a reluctant muse is like, so I'll take them as they come. ;-(
Comments from author:
thanks, I am working on my backlog a bit as I get time, hopefully updating some of the older fics that I enjoy, if you have any suggestions let me know.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Animal I've become 4" from race
Review:
Reminds me of unleashed. and just as fun too read as the movie was to watch
Comments from author:
it was based off of it, glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [race] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Animal I've become 4" from Downery
Review:
Waited 5 years to learn that Quentin was alive. Probably have to wait another 30 before he dies again. Would've been better with no other updates. At least the previous readers would've kept thinking Travers was dead.
Comments from author:
While I appreciate reviews and some commentary on my upload rates I do not like to be continually harassed about the issue, especially after apologizing for the delay, and since you only joined in December of last year and have never commented on this story to date I find your comment to be insulting at best.

Please attempt to conduct yourself better in the future, or refrain from reviewing without 'Constructive Criticism'.
Review By [Downery] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Vilkath
Review:
Sort feel cheated with Xander, his life is hell and Travers just died on his own from an 'accident' and he's not even man enough to go back and kill the council that made him on his own. Heck even feels bad about killing humans still! If his life as a pet kill toy didn't teach what ever was left of Xander that some humans deserve to die there really isn't to much hope for him in the long run.
Comments from author:
With all of this at the moment Xander isn't really 'Xander' he is a possessed Hyena spirit with the original soul fighting it's way back to the forefront, the Hyena has no problem killing humans, Xander is still just a kid and gets a bit squicky over the whole mass blood and carnage deal the Hyena enjoys.

don't worry, the council isn't done yet. And neither is Xander.

-Tjin
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [10 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Maeven
Review:
Please update this, it's got potential :)
Review By [Maeven] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Cutiepie
Review:
No, no, no, no, no. That was an unsatisfactory death for Travers. He was supposed to die while facing down the Alpha, scrambling to regain control and not believing that an "animal" was able to get the better of him only to be slowly mauled to death.

That said, I'm liking this story. I am curious as to how Buffy was revived without Xander there (was it Willow? or perhaps Giles?), and why the reversal spell to remove the Alpha from Xander didn't work in the first place (before he was captured). So many questions, so many potential plot lines. Update again soon, please. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [29 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from purrfus
Review:
Loved the gremlin.

So exactly what does a possessed Xander with Alpha in charge look like thats so scary?
Review By [purrfus] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from junnights
Review:
er... just what challenge was this a response to?.... ?? or something else?... except that I like this story, it's promising (and I just love primal xander hehe:)

keep writing
Hildegunn
Review By [junnights] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from mithrilandtj
Review:
You needed more details on how Travers died. (the big SOB)

but other than that, this is a good story.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from amusewithaview
Review:
Interesting. More soon? Please?

Danke
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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