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Review of chapter "Animal I've Become 2" from Bumpkin
Review:
Still interested here - looking forward to seeing where you are going with this... how much of Xander is actually going to be present within the possessed version of him even with the collar there and it's cracked reality? Very curious to know what you intend... :D

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Animal I've Become 2" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Good mixture.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [27 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Animal I've Become 2" from Bobboky
Review:
it is good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Animal I've Become 2" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
Interesting premise / take on an idea that hasn't been touched upon too much by fanfiction yet. To the author: keep writing and don't bringing us those ideas of yours.
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [27 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Animal I've Become 2" from LanceAvalon
Review:
Yeah but the plane had Quentin Travers on it so the only problem I had with it was that you didn't show Travers scream like a five-year old girl and piss him self before smashing into the ground...Maybe I really do have issues
Comments from author:
Your right, I probably should have shown that, sorry.

I swear I'll kill him better next time.

-Tjin
Review By [LanceAvalon] • Date [27 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Leashed" from Infinix
Review:
Definately worth seeing where you plan on taking this.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Leashed" from Eaggae
Review:
It is definitely interesting enough to rate more chapters. I don't think I've ever seen this particular thread of thought before, there arn't that many Xander-ALPHA fic to begin with where ALPHA is in charge and none of them has had him shackled. So yes please continue this.
Review By [Eaggae] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Leashed" from AscendedWarrior
Review:
huh, I don't beleive I've read a storyling quite like this before... good job!
Comments from author:
i'm glad you liked it.

-Tjin
Review By [AscendedWarrior] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Leashed" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice start, looking forward for more. hehe and let travers suffer...........
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, the general consensus seems to be for Travers death... well they say the customer is always right so I'll see what i can do.

-Tjin
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Leashed" from CPTSkip
Review:
Oh my! This is an outstanding beginning. Is there any Xander still there inside the Primal's head? Will the Scoobies be able to save Xander? And when he meets the Scoobies again, will he see the girls as potential mates or lunch? How has the missing Xander changed the Standard Buffyverse since Xander was essential to their survival so many times? And most important, how soon will the Primal figure out how to rip Travers into little bloody pieces? So many questions, I can't wait to read more to find out some answers.
Comments from author:
i really do hope to get some answers for you soon.

i'm glad you enjoyed the story.

-Tjin
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Leashed" from Bumpkin
Review:
I would love to know what the Scoobs thought about the council taking off with one of their own... That and of course I am very interested to see how much of Xander is still in there - will the real Xan be able to quell the hyena and tame it to his will and in that way get rid of Travers? So many possibilities here, really interested in seeing where you go with it.

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Comments from author:
well as the entire scooby gang was inside the Hyena house and Xander was taken outside... they really don't know he was taken.

just that he was gone.

-Tjin
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Leashed" from Lanhar
Review:
oh, well, i like it, its very much a leading catching intro, and i definatly want to see what happens next!

Lanna
Comments from author:
well i hope to have some more for you within the week.

-Tjin
Review By [Lanhar] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Leashed" from Greywizard
Review:
Well, I'm definitely wanting more of this, buddy. Especially the penultimate scene where he rips Traver's head off and $h*ts down his neck. ;-)

More soon, please!
Comments from author:
an interesting idea, i may even use it.

but whatever happens rest assured that Alpha will be more then pleased with how it ends.

-Tjin
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Leashed" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Caught my attention.
Comments from author:
i'm glad it did, hope you enjoyed it.

-Tjin
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Leashed" from MistDragon
Review:
When Alpha gets loose Travers is going to be in a world of hurt. I just hope Xander comes out of it ok mentally. If he has been aware all this time merging with Alpha won't be so bad, if not it will be quite the shock for him. If the story goes that way of course. A good start, please continue. MD
Comments from author:
at the moment Xander is in the same condition he was when he was originally possessed.

i'm glad you enjoyed the fic.

-Tjin
Review By [MistDragon] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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