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Review of story "Fragile Existence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Cooooooool. Finish! Please, I am begging you to add more. This story could go so many directions, and end up in very interesting ways, especially with Dawn and Jack. Write more, Kay?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [25 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fragile Existence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Excellent, Laney, as always. The premise is fascinating, and I eagerly await more.

Sirius
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fragile Existence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Now I hope you are going to post more of this story soon. Or I might have to hurt you.... lol just kidding... You are evil I say... leaving us hanging like this. I want to read more.

In other words, a very good start. Keep writing.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fragile Existence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Okaaaaaay.... This has potential all right, and given that it's in the Dawn pairing section, I'm looking forward to where it's going.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fragile Existence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I'm really enjoying this so far, please continue!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fragile Existence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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great, this story sounds really interesting, and i don't think dawn and jack are gross, not when he is really a 16 year old kid.... also the whole 'not real' thing- he could pribably relate to dawn...
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fragile Existence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oh, very interesting. I'm not familiar with the events that led to a mini-Jack either, but you presented it in such a way it was accessable to us oblivious types, as well as making an engaging story set up. The pairing you've proposed could be fantastic, and I look forward to seeing how you manage that one. Especially now that Jack has been tossed out of school. Looking forward to the next chapter.

houses
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fragile Existence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Hey
great start! Be nice and keep going with it. Doing new stuff is always good. Even if it turns out badly. Still, like i said good start.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fragile Existence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Damn, that was fast. I confess I had a similiar idea about combining my two favorite shows. Lets see where you go with this...
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fragile Existence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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cool beginning. I like this view inside Jack, very well characterized and fitting to boot.
I'm looking forward to see how that goes on.
If Xander is coming to be in this story I think he migh be a good new, male friend for Jack - just a bit food for your thoughts.

Keep up the good work
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fragile Existence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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*grins* Oooh, poor Jack! Though for my reading purposes, yay! ;) I'm really enjoying this and you have teenage-Jack down really well. Can't wait to see what happens next!

~Kaz
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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