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Review of chapter "You can look, but you can't touch" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Glad to see someone taking up this challenge - nice twist on it too, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Evil conspiracy as requested, but I'm not able to do the ice skating scene sorry.

I like your 'midwich cuckoo' challenge. I might do that one day too. The houseful of potentials would be hilarious. It could be over the top and have male pregnancy with Xander and Andrew. And would include Amy in Sunnydale at the time.

And Charley had to be a slayer, you're right!
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [29 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You can look, but you can't touch" from AllenPitt
the Kate/Xander relationship is going to be majorly awkward when they find out--each will think the other was 'playing' them... Poor Kate... she always falls for a guy who then turns out to be dark in some way...
based on the film, things are going to get very ugly......
Comments from author:
Actually I don't know if things will get that ugly, because it is only F15.

I don't know if Kate ever had a boyfriend on Ats.

Kate and Xander's 'relationship' will throw a spanner into each other's works.

Thank you for your review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [29 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Please me, tease me, go ahead and leave me" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
--There was a website set up for the previous inhabitants of the hole in the ground that was now Sunnydale. And on that website was a message for someone named Faith. Saying to contact Maury, he had something from a friend for her.--


Hey, you're a master of understatement and your stuff flows smoothly.

Ouch, AU fic without Faith in Season 4/Angel, S7/Buffy. No wonder Xander's dark. :/
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your review.

"your stuff flows smoothly"

I hope so. I worry about that for a reader.

Xander's not dark exactly. More grown up. Someone has to do the dirty work.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [29 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Please me, tease me, go ahead and leave me" from AllenPitt
Hm.. hopefully Maury will come out of this better than he did in the tv ep... the tape of the Mayor of Sunnydale... ye gods, talk about interesting for anyone viewing it ( I doubt anyone but faith saw it in the tv show timeline).. plus of course...Maury. Kate will be quite interested in him being a courier. And, talk about loyalty to the mayor, yeesh. Gee...I wonder what the bodyswitch device will end up being used for...
I have to say Xander was kinda dumb to send only 3 guys after Faith & not including a slayer or two... but whatever.. the newer ones wouldn't last long against her, probably... I'd imagine finding out about the kid.... would make him more determined (to take her away from 'evil mom' )... though if you follow the film, it'll take Faith telling him to make him realize who the dad is....
Comments from author:
Maury will come out better.

I think Kate found the tape interesting.

Giles sent out the hit squad and he is not his best these days.

Xander and Caitlyn. Do men like to find out they have illegitimate children normally?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heaven knows what a girl can do" from Ouatic
Not familiar with Devour but I've always liked The Long Kiss Goodnight -- except for that brat. She belongs up there with the boy from The Replacement Killers as cinematic children one (well, maybe it's just me) kinf of wants to see offed. Anyways, now I want to watch the movie, imagining Mr. Wilkins and Mrs. Summers chatting with her... I'm sure it would be an improvement.
Comments from author:
I thought that little girl was adorable! But having a haunted or possessed teddy bear does add interest to any child I suppose. Or Caitlyn could just have a very good imagination.

Mrs Summers does not talk to Caitlyn. Only Mr Wilkins.

Thank you for your review.
Review By [Ouatic] • Date [27 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heaven knows what a girl can do" from AllenPitt
Neat. Mr. Wilkins & Mrs. Summers (I wonder if Mrs. S talks to her, too?) one can only imagine how freaked out X. would be to hear about either one ....and it's nice that the mayor is looking out for her, too. What a nice guy!<
wetworks team... which will of course end with one incredibly brassed off slayer (as Spike once said to Angel....).. Looking forward to Kate's arrival, too--she doesn't know much about slayers, but knows about vamps & the like... and probably thinks herself well clear of all that....
Good touch, having Buffy be dead---ie it results in a Xander who's not so willing to be reasonable as he might otherwise have been....
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review.

Yes, Kate hasn't had to worry about supernatural crap for a while.

Xander is a hardened man these days. Hardened I tell you.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prop me up with another pill" from AllenPitt
This is demented. I love it! Have to agree about the xander fics--the ones that center on him tend to have him gain superhuman powers instantly, plus he's all wise and all knowing. I like the character, but he, like all the Bvs characters, had lots of flaws (it's what made them human).. in this case, he's going to be assuming Faith is crazy like Dana & will probably want custody of the kid (could get ugly if he calls in a squad of slayers to back him up) .... plus won't believe she's really amnesiac
Also...if she gets her memory back... could get even uglier for poor Faith....
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your review.

X.H. will assume Faith is crazy like Dana (thanks for reminding me about her actually).

Faith definitely will get her memory back eventually. But will she still want to play Mommy and small town fiance when she does?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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