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Xander's Not-So-Ordinary Patrol

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Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Markelo
Review:
I like this!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [5 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from FlitShadowflame
Review:
*nodnod* I do like it. As a matter of fact, I think I'll write some BtVS/Eragon. Perhaps with a reversed premises, you know - Elf-spell summons Xander instead of banishing egg? ^.^

Ooooo, Murtagh/Xander....

I love Murtagh ^.^
Comments from author:
*Smiles Dreamily* Murtaugh was absolutely... licakble. Yum!

Unfortunately he was also the ONLY good part of that dang movie. Read the books!!! If you already have, YAY do an Eragon-fic!

Summon Xander pre-Evil!Murtaugh? *Bats Eyelashes* Pretty please?

Danke for the review, glad you liked it!
Review By [FlitShadowflame] • Date [30 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from AnthonyR
Review:
interesting story so far. this is only the second Eragon story Ive read here. i hope you continue it and base it on the books. i haven't seen the movie yet, but while i hear it is good, i also hear that isn't at all like the books. anyways, i hope you continue this.
Review By [AnthonyR] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from anpu
Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE. THIS WAS AN EXCELLENT BEGINNING.
Review By [anpu] • Date [7 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from JediKnight
Review:
Good story but too short.
I hope you decide to add more.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Really am going to have to get round to watching Eragon, if only to understand the backstory... :) I liked this: A nice example of introspective Xander.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [3 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from (Past Donor)vinniebatman
Review:
I want to see more of this, esp. once Xander becomes a dragon rider and takes his pet on patrol.
Review By [(Past Donor)vinniebatman] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from AscendedWarrior
Review:
I haven't read the book, or watched the movie but this has peaked my interest, please continue this.
Review By [AscendedWarrior] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
This is a very interesting beginning! Even if you don't write a whole story, at least show what happens when the egg hatches!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Great work please continue.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from LordCorwin
Review:
You have to continue this .. as I'd like to see a "Dragon" in the modern era.... hehe, especially on the hellmouth
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice start and i would like to see it continued. i loved the eragon books (just the movie was total crap)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Tjin
Review:
YAY! A SECOND ERAGON FIC, A SECOND ERAGON FIC! I'M NOT THE ONLY WRITER WITH THIS PLOT BUNNY YAY!

sorry, i'm glad to see you posted this, i am deffinitly hoping for more.

-Tjin
Review By [Tjin] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Ladeia
Review:
Love the start.... Hope you continue this. :)
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burned Flesh and Scorched Asphalt" from Graycalls
Review:
Yes! This is what I was looking for! Please continue.
Comments from author:
YOU! You and your stupid bunny-inspiring Challenge!

Gah!

I was enjoying a nice peaceful convalescence until I saw that dang Challenge. Eating soup, watching TV, trying to get better, and then WHAM! Damn bunny.

Anyways, I'm glad you liked it but I'm still not sure about continuing it... Maybe, maybe not, and possibly I have an evil plot working around somewhere in my thought-processes...

Danke
Review By [Graycalls] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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