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Secrets: A Father Goose Tale

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Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from Gaeriel
Review:
A very different method of storytelling that I enjoyed. This looks like it'll be quite a story.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Gaeriel] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from LFW
Review:
Great first chapter
Good action
Needs more sex after the great build up to start
Looking forward to more
Comments from author:
Thank you. Sorry, 'fraid you'll to wait til oh, say , Chapter 1 for the first sex scene...:)
Review By [LFW] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from emilythestrange
Review:
*lol* wee, I love this method of storytelling. A voice so different from the others, but still amazing.
I know it will be worth the wait to see how you integrate this with the SG1 verse.
One question; what season (for SG1) are you basing this in?
Comments from author:
Thank you. Not sure yet, suspect the voices will vary a bit in this fic.
Review By [emilythestrange] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from Booster
Review:
*snorts loudly and repeatedly* Bizarre, but utterly entertaining. Much as I DID like that style for one part, I hope the rest is a more regular type.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Yes, you're right, I think that voice would grow old in time. Might still come back for the odd aside though...
Review By [Booster] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from AngusH
Review:
brilliant start!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [AngusH] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from Thedruid
Review:
Nice beginning. I guess the next logical X-over with tis series is Stargate. Was wondering if you wre going to do so, with like NCIS, or maybe Threshold. Gald to see more of it anyway, whater you cross with!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Interesting that you would say that, NCIS was very much on the short lsit of possible crosses.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from JasonBarnett
Review:
I've liked all your stories so far, but for some reason I just couldn't find any interest in this story. Something was driving me forward through it, just barely skimming it. Like a voice in my head saying, "okay, there will be important facts here, need to read this part, this part you can just skim through fast."
Comments from author:
Well, hope you give it a couple more chapters before giving up on it.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from MistofRainbows
Review:
The first part was a bit hard to get into, though strangely interesting style. I'm sure that 3rd snake like creature will cause some issues. It's interesting so far. I like the long string of cussing for the I hate zombies.
Comments from author:
Thanks. As to the snake, that would be telling.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from SilverWave
Review:
Priceless and well worth the wait :D
Thanks!


Cant wait to see the interaction with the SG characters...
Maybe they will be shown how to conduct a war against a species who sees you as cattle... and point out to them their bad habit of being the 'nice' guys and not going for the kill.
Comments from author:
Thank you .... I thnk it's going to be an interesting mix.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from BigRedX
Review:
Excellent opening to what promises to be another brilliant story.

Do I detect a bit of a Tom Robbins vibe in the narative style?
Comments from author:
Thank you. As to TR, not intentionally but who knows where it bubbles up from? I have read and like Robbins stuff, but it has been awhile.
Review By [BigRedX] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from Tabee
Review:
*bounces*

I'm so glad you're continuing the story! And with SG1!

If there was a third snake, it'll prolly come back to bite them all on the ass, eh?

Happy writing and update soon please :)
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Or thereabouts.....
Review By [Tabee] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Very good. Funny too. It's rare when writers have more than a plot or a good grasp on characters. Super piece of writing.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from Arjai
Review:
Go, go, go!!! and the Faith picture is awe inspiring. Xan's not bad either, but not into guys. Looks like a durn good tale in the making!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Arjai] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from KzintiKiller
Review:
I was wonder where you were going to go next. This ought to be fun. Makes me wonder how some snakes managed to stay hidden on Earth this long without giving themselves away by trying to conquer the world...or least a small to medium sized country. ;-)
Comments from author:
And what makes you think they haven't (tried to conquer)....:)
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue : Pretty Girls and Handsome Men" from Sigma
Review:
Can I just say - in a completely non stalkerish way - how much I love what you do? To misquote Grey's Anatomy - "Seriously? Seriously."
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Sigma] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Not Rated
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