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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
All the elements of a great story: Batman and Buffyverse. And then you give me Illyria and, specifically, Harley--two of my favorite female characters from those verses!!! You know I love this. It has a massive amount of plotbunny potential!
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EternalPrelude
Review:
Not bad...I love this idea. Harley's always been one of my top villians from BTAS, and Fred/Illyria was always one of my favorite characters from ANGEL. Throwing the two together....it gives me a happy.

Really interested in seeing this continued...I can see several ways for this one to go, and I like all of them. Intrigued to see where you take this.

One concern...the 'accents'. Now, I know it's hard to convey through text, but I don't get a hint of Spike's speech patterns from how he talks in your fic. It's a minor thing, but in my opinion, part of the reason everyone loves Spike is his sound, that quasi-Cockney accent that somehow oozes smarmy wiseassed badass, with a hint of caring underneath. Other than that, good stuff.
Review By [EternalPrelude] • Date [31 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Looneyboyo
Review:
Intriguing...not a lot happens here, but there's a lot of potential. Personally, I;d have preferred the story to have been set earlier, cos I like Fred more than Illyria
Review By [Looneyboyo] • Date [6 Dec 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Good work so far, I hope you'll add more soon
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [24 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
It's kind of weird that no one in Arkham or Gotham has heard of telephones, lost letters, or the notorious unreliability of the US Postal System. Not to mention that they didn't receive permission from Fred first, to make sure that she was willing. One wonders how the author would like it if a half-sibling who had been convicted of abetting multiple murders, armed robberies, etc., was suddenly brought over with only a letter as warning that could easily have never arrived - and then told that the half-sibling was suddenly in the author's custody, and the author was responsible for any actions committed by said convict.

While the idea behind the story has potential, that little bit of comedy is such a gross oversight that this reader cannot "buy" the premise.
Comments from author:
Well, the author would have to say that the author would do anything for a sister, half or full, no matter what...if the reviewer was curious. And if you knew my real-life relationship with my sister, you wouldnt' doubt this. As for the "gross oversight," I intend to correct that...next chapter. You can't fit everything into one chapter...that would make the story boring and wouldn't catch anyone's interest. Or maybe you can, but I'm of the belief that it's better if you leave some things (even such an insignificant detail--in reference to the story overall--as this) till later chapters.

Now, I understand that you were not flaming me, and I hope you realize that I don't mean this as a flame. I'm flattered that you took the time to review and that you pointed this out (it shows that you were paying attention. I like that in a reader.) I hope to see you more on the other chapters, and I do thank you for this review.

On a side note, to all the other reviewers who may read this, I don't mean to say that you don't pay attention. I know that you did by some of the comments left.

And to end this, KingHenrytheV, I like your penname. Please come back again!
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [12 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Infinix
Review:
Oh there is no way this will be boring. Harley and Illyria, hehehe.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I hope this follows through as well!
Review By [Infinix] • Date [12 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
Okay, this definitely has some interesting potential, especially if some of Harley's 'friends' show up.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I've been getting similiar comments to this effect. I'll give all of you a little spoiler...I do intend for someone or someone(s) from Harley's life to show!
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [12 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
Good beginning - definitely a cross I haven't seen before - keep writing - please!
Comments from author:
Thanks! You've really never seen a cross like this before?
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jorrie
Review:
Oooo, very cool, VERY cool. Can't wait for more! I'll be on the look out!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I can't wait to hear from you again!
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from misterq
Review:
ooh, this is an interesting premise - I always liked Harley as one of the best characters from the DC verse...
Can't wait to see more
Comments from author:
Thanks! Harley's one of my favorites too!
Review By [misterq] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mackon
Review:
Would love to see where your going with this. If you have Harley with no Joker your going to find Ivy around at somepoint. I wonder what will happen then song of the green vs power to control plants. Will Illyria find an allie or rip Ivys spine out for daring to command her green friends. Looking forward to updates.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I look forward to more reviews from you!
Review By [Mackon] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Klyk
Review:
That ending was just pure evil.
But I like the start of the story nicely done.
Comments from author:
I love cliffhangers, don't you? Sorry about that. Thanks for the review!
Review By [Klyk] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WhiteWolf
Review:
She's going from one nuthouse to the other. But on the other hand, Angel and Spike have enough experience with crazy people to help Harley. I'm wonder how she's going to react to Illyria.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Yeah, that house is going to be pretty crazy! Hmm...how will she react to Illyria?
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tatsu
Review:
oh this should be interesting. good start.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Tatsu] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
I really like this... can't wait for more!

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this!
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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