Just fun. I'm interested in how you're bringing bad guys back in, since there always are some. Can't wait to see where you take this, since it's been this good so far.
Review By [mousemt] • Date [19 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fighting in Fire" from mithrilandtj
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Love it!!! And Yoda gave her away!!!
Okay, okay.... who did Buffy see on the lava planet? Is Whistler still stalking her?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [19 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fighting in Fire" from Kirallie
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Loved the wedding!! Who was it Buffy saw on Mustafar? Pity the PTB couldn't do something to let the Scoobies see the wedding, to know she is truly happy. Keep up the great work!!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [18 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fighting in Fire" from Calendar
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What a sweet ending. For a while, you had me really worried Obi-Wan was going to turn to the Dark Side, but hopefully that's completely out of the picture (if it was ever in the picture). It really was the perfect ending to a lovely fic, and I can't wait for the next one!
Review By [Calendar] • Date [18 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fighting in Fire" from MistofRainbows
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It was an interesting story. It's always nice to see different outcomes for Anakin.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [18 May 07] • Not Rated
I really like that Yoda really trusts the two of them and has supported them from the beginning, and that he's sending the warning to the Jedi based on that.
Plus Anakin finding out about Order 66, and the the way you've turned that fight around with Anakin doing most of the fighting against Palpatine. But from Palpy's comments I'm thinking he still has something up his sleeve.
Buffy & Obi-Wan sparring to work off pent up energy was a nice distraction - for a while I thought they were going to be doing something else. And loved all the "he wonders where Anakin gets it" comments.
Review By [Nosi] • Date [16 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
ahh, cliffhanger! I deal very BADLY with cliffhangers! ...Is this a 'She' who is native to the Star Wars dimension, or is 'She' someone a little further from home?
Comments from author:
'She' is a native to the Star Wars world. But thats all I'm telling you! :-D And i know, i hate reading Cliffhangers too, but they're so much fun to write! hehehe. Thank you for the kind words.
Review of chapter "Out of the Shadows" from KnightOwl
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It might have been short, but it was a great new part. I think "she" is the Jedi that Obi-Wan was in love with and gave up to join the Jedi. I know she was supposed to be dead in the previous story, but that is who I suspect it is. I really like the way you turned the fight around with Palpatine and they captured him instead of killing him. I also love the interaction between Obi-Wan and Buffy, especially when she touched his cheek before his battle with Grievous. I hope the next part comes soon!
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you like it. Yeah, i really didnt want either of them to kill Palpy, it just didnt seem right. Look for the next and final chapy of this story in a few days. :-) Thank you!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [15 May 07] • Not Rated
This is really good. I am definitely enjoying the sequel. I like that Buffy is putting all of the clues together and starting to figure things out. I like how you had Anakin not believing her but also starting to doubt himself. And that was great the way he finally realized that Buffy was right and something was dark about Palpatine. I love how Buffy was able to turn Obi-Wan away from killing Dooku and hope she keeps him on the right path. I would hate for Buffy to have another love turn evil on her. I can't wait for your next update!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [29 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To the Light" from mithrilandtj
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Yay for introducing young Lando!
Double Yay for Ani *finally* seeing the truth and Palpy's plans beginning to unravel. (couldn't have happened to a nicer guy)
Update soon!!!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [18 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
hey i just read force of a slayer and code of a slayer and i have to say they are really well written stories. i love the couples and how you managed to keep the story going even though you switched the charters a bit. keep up the great work. can't wait for an update. ~TG~
Review By [TGirl] • Date [17 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]