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Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Current Donor)kayariley
Review:
please, please update soon!
Review By [(Current Donor)kayariley] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates
Review:
This story is amazing...the last two chapters had tears in my eyes! I hope you update it soon! I feel so sorry for Dawn cause she can't tell Elliot that she's his daughter too!
Review By [(Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Current Donor)kayariley
Review:
well, I think Dawn should follow her own oath right back to New York!
Review By [(Current Donor)kayariley] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Mcspender
Review:
Obviously, Willow doesn't know just how strong is a Family bond.
I wanna see her reaction when she sees Elliot in Cleveland, let's see how her world view changes when she see someone so ferociously protective of kin like Elliot is.

See ya!.
Comments from author:
I feel like pouting. I think you my plans out. LOL. I think I can safely say Elliot is coming to Cleveland. Other than that, you'll have to wait and see ;)
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from spring
Review:
Okay now I understand the reasons behind the gangs disapproval. So now what is Dawn going to do in finding her own path and is Elliot going to go looking for her? More soon please of this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
I'll do my best to update quickly. LOL. It wasn't supposed to go so long between updates that it did. I'm glad you like it! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Review By [spring] • Date [21 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from zigpal
Review:
Great update. Willow doesn't get it. Just because she never really had familiar ties doesn't mean Dawn is going to feel the same way, but something tells me Eliott isn't going to take the there and gone lying down.
Comments from author:
Exactly! LOL. And of course Elliot isn't gonna give up :P Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [zigpal] • Date [20 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from zigpal
Review:
Great update. Willow doesn't get it. Just because she never really had familiar ties doesn't mean Dawn is going to feel the same way, but something tells me Eliott isn't going to take the there and gone lying down.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [20 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from (Current Donor)kayariley
Review:
Poor Dawn! Poor Elliot! Please fix them!
Comments from author:
I'll do my best ;P
Review By [(Current Donor)kayariley] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from mayoi
Review:
please more!

i can't belive elliot would just let this go
Comments from author:
Now, now... he wouldn't be my favorite cop, if he did, would he?
Review By [mayoi] • Date [11 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from MercyJones
Review:
Love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter! update please!
Comments from author:
I'll do my best ;)
Review By [MercyJones] • Date [4 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from spring
Review:
I love the chapter even though it's short. Your still leaving me clueless though about the WHY the Scoobies don't want Dawn near Elliot. More soon please hopefully with an explanation.
Comments from author:
Explanation will come, most likely in the next couple of chapters ;)
Review By [spring] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from zigpal
Review:
Great update. Oh boy, you just know Eliot isn't going to be taking this real well. Maybe, he'll show up when the rest of the Scoobies do, so they'll have some explaining quite possibly about why Dawn HAS to leave. Hurry back, so I can see what happens.
Comments from author:
LOL. I'll do my best. I'm glad you like it!
Review By [zigpal] • Date [29 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I was going to write that I was glad I hadn't found the story earlier, so I was able to read ten chapters at once...but now I've read them and I want ***MORE***. SOON!!!
Comments from author:
LOL. I'm glad you like it, and I hope to update soon myself ;)
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [29 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
What the gang from Sunnydale fails to realize is that Elliott is not with the Sunnydale PD...he's with the NYPD and thats a whole different kettle of fish...
Comments from author:
Yup :P
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [28 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Ugh! I want more! I know it was a great and dramactic stopping place. Sigh. The emotion of this is blowing me away. I know that writing emotion is very hard to do but you really make it look (read) easy.

Good work and thanks for sharing your work.
Comments from author:
Writing angst and emotions is what I do best. LOL. Comedy and suspense, not so much. Glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [28 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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