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Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from spring
Review:
I can completely understand your reasoning to want to keep these chapters short. it maximizes what you are writing and makes more of an impact. I love this chapter and hope that you are able to update this wonderful fic again soon (when you are feeling inspired, feeding the muse). I feel that this fic is extremely visual and you are doing an excellent job in capturing everybody's nature and I really really love that. I am interested in the whys that everyone has in not wanting Dawn in Elliott's life the explanation should be very interesting. (forgive me if this was already stated.) Again I love this wonderful fic.f
Comments from author:
You're making me blush. Thank you for saying this. It made my day. Having a reader like what I'm writing is the best thing. LOL.

I'll do my best to update soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [spring] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from zigpal
Review:
Great update. Oh boy, it looks like Elliott has a decision to make, and if he makes the right one, the Scoobies won't have a say in what Dawn does.
Comments from author:
Wait, and you'll see ;P *grins*
Review By [zigpal] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
And this begs the question just what will Elliott do....and by the way in a throw down between Elliott and the Scoobies, my money is on Elliott!
Comments from author:
LOL. You're guessing Elliott huh? Well. You'll see :P
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [22 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Wonderful addition and why or why do I somehow feel even Xander &/or Willow will cross Elliott....Giles may but not those two.....
Comments from author:
You'll have to wait and see ;) I'm glad you like it!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent story with some marvelous characterizations. But so sad ...
Comments from author:
And sad is what I do best. LOL. Glad you like the story so far!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from zigpal
Review:
Great update. Poor Dawn, she just wants the time to get to know her 'dad', and the Scoobies are mucking that up. No big surprise though, they were always mucking things up for Buffy, but I like that Faith is looking out for her and letting her know that they are coming. I'm interested to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
I never saw much of Faith and Dawn on the show, and exploring a friendship between them has always been something I wanted to do. This story was an excellent chance to do so. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [zigpal] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Current Donor)kayariley
Review:
I've been really enjoying this story and I hope you will continue. I love stories where Buffy turns out to be Elliot's daughter somehow...

Please???
Comments from author:
LOL. I won't abandon the story I swear.
Review By [(Current Donor)kayariley] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Javian
Review:
Very nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks :D
Review By [Javian] • Date [15 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from mayoi
Review:
please write more!!!
Comments from author:
Sure :P
Review By [mayoi] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from spring
Review:
I love it. Short and sweet. More soon please
Comments from author:
I'll do my best. I'm glad you liked it!
Review By [spring] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Loved it and I keep getting way ahead of you ...like to where Dawn tells him or doesn't tell him he just finds out...like I said I keep getting way ahead of you..and thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
LOL. I'm the same when I read stories too. I'm glad you like it!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from zigpal
Review:
Great update. Damn, this one was heart wrenching. Poor Dawn is trying to help remember her sister while avoiding her own grief, and she should know better since it is going to come out sooner rather than later.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [zigpal] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from zafaran
Review:
I'm glad talking to Elliot seems to be having a helpful effect on Dawn. Will the whole truth end up coming out? Will he find out that Dawn is his mystical daughter created from Buffy? Will she end up having a functioning, caring father instead of the deadbeat, uncaring father Hank Summers became. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from KnightOwl
Review:
I feel so bad for Dawn and I liked what she thought about her existence because of Buffy. It's sweet that she doesn't want Elliott to really know about Buffy because he would feel guilty. I hope you write more soon!
Comments from author:
I'll do my best. I'm glad you like the story so far!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Excellent.

Characters are perfect
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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