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Review of chapter "chapter fifteen *edited*" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Please do more!

Please do More!

Please do MORE!

MOREMOREMORE!!!

Soon ?
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [14 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter fifteen *edited*" from LalaithQuetzalli
Review:
I'm not quite sure if I should be nervous, upset or just laugh my ass off!
This is really one of the strangest, funniest, most confusing and defiantly most interesting fics I've ever read here at TtH. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. I mean, just how long are you gonna stick to cannon? at least on the BtVS side (since I've seen thus far less than an episode of Stargate I can't exactly comment on that side).
Anyway, update soon please!
Review By [LalaithQuetzalli] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter fifteen *edited*" from banner
Review:
I'd forgotten how much I'd enjoyed this story. I just reread it from the beginning, and I still love it. I hope your muse leads you back here.
Review By [banner] • Date [19 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter fifteen *edited*" from wraithrune
Review:
nice :)
Comments from author:
thanks! :)
Review By [wraithrune] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter fifteen *edited*" from kaithryne
Review:
Haaa - cheese!
Comments from author:
lol, i know (:
Review By [kaithryne] • Date [8 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter fifteen *edited*" from Xsara
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [Xsara] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter fifteen *edited*" from Jess
Review:
Fantastic! I love this story! *HUGS*
Comments from author:
thanks!
Glad you like it
*HUGS BACK*
Review By [Jess] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter fifteen *edited*" from banner
Review:
Interesting setup, and I really approve of the kids' discretion. Sam needs to figure out something to do to keep Willow focused. Boredom is bad for kids. The effect of naquadah combined with magic is frightening. Luckily, Sam (usually) avoids the Hellmouth.
I was rather hoping that Daniel would get a chance to read everything in the library. Darn.
Comments from author:
the kids really wouldn't tell them everything (:
i figured that naquada would make magic scarier and more powerful- just like that naquada warhead in the 1st ep of season 2.
thanks for reviewing!
Review By [banner] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter four" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
It was going fine until you displayed a stunning lack of creativity and shoehorned the standard plotline into place despite the fact that it didn't fit.

Have Xander stay behind and bring Willow? What was in that tea he was drinking?

EDIT: I know it's not constructive. You hit my biggest pet peeve and then I mindlessly grumble for a bit. I really should learn to stop that.

Always figure out what changes would have been made from the earlier actions. If you're writing the same old scene as canon when you have already made changes, than it's a good sign you've screwed up. Changes should always snowball.
Comments from author:
"stay behind and bring Willow?" nah, that was Sam and Jack- Jack was bring Sam along because she's his 2IC.
anywho i had reasons for keeping it close to the Halloween episode, i merely typed up how i thought Sam and Jack would react to a situation like that. then i carried it on from there.

not very constructive in the criticism, coz that's not likely to help me improve on my story.

EDIT: S'okay you should see my other review on Fanfiction.net- i think i went a little nuts on that story a few years back :)

i get the whole snowballing thing, i always wondered if i should keep to cannon- it's not that fun going over episodes that you haven't written, it's actually a little annoying; still i've started on the episodes i'm on NOW so i'm gonna finish those and then branch off.

now i don't have to watch the episodes and go over *EVERY* *SINGLE* *LITTLE* *DETAIL*- plus i have to keep running from room to room to get the dialogue from the TV to the Computer which, needless to say, gave me a lot of exercise. :|

thanks for the constructive review (:
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [8 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter thirteen" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Impressive work. Emotionally heavy, handled well.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
i figured that W/X/S/J would be badly effected by the spell what with Jolinar's memories, Jack's son and everything else.
i kinda expected the story to be funny at first but it didn't turn out that way :.]
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [8 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter nine" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Excellent and well thought out chapter. Too many fics have them rushing down there or informing everyone with no though about the consequences.
Comments from author:
Yea, i always got that too. never understood it, especially as all four people are bright enough to realize that they'd mess it up.
thanks for the review!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [7 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter five" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Where did Sam and Cordy magically appear from? Weren't they just with Giles?
Comments from author:
Giles told them to go when he saw Ethan, they went, they met the others and that's how it happened. hope that alleviates that confusion (:

thanks for the review!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [7 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter fifteen *edited*" from kayron
Review:
Snyder the Rat......HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Works for me!
Comments from author:
heh, me too (:
Review By [kayron] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter fifteen *edited*" from manic
Review:
Oh, I 've been dying for the two groups to get together. Though, I liked that you didn't have them do it right away.
Comments from author:
i like developing my stories at a rather slow pace, then the story's more likely to come out better.
thanks for reviewing!
Review By [manic] • Date [17 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter eight" from manic
Review:
Neat concept! I'm enjoying the fic, thank you.
Comments from author:
thanks!
i'm glad you're enjoying it (:
Review By [manic] • Date [17 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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