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Review of chapter "Whole New World" from schulyr
Review:
This is incredibly well written, and I can't wait to read more
Comments from author:
Oooh, your review gave me a warm fuzzy. Glad you think it's well written, more on the way!
Review By [schulyr] • Date [10 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from DrDamage
Review:
This is good stuff, and has some real possibilities. Looking forward to the rest of your tale.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [10 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from Nane
Review:
great start, can't wait to read more
Comments from author:
It's a comin, it's a comin. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Nane] • Date [10 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from hypatia
Review:
Such an interesting beginning, I hope you don't last too much between updates.
Comments from author:
WHAHHH! Your not gonna like this, but I'm one of those authors you wish you could hunt down so you can beat them down for more of the story. But really, this story is coming out much faster than nomally. So no hunting, k?
Review By [hypatia] • Date [10 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Great beginning.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [10 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from chajalive
Review:
ohhhhh, what a wonderful beginning to a story. Please do continue. But, did you really write Xander as only having an eye left, even as a child? Or will we find out that it is simply the trauma left from "Priests"?
Chaja
Comments from author:
What a good question! The truth is *whisper* he's only got one eye, even as a kid. I KNOW!! I'm so cruel, but there is a reason for it, you'll find out in the chapter.
Review By [chajalive] • Date [10 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from Bumpkin
Review:
Wow, cool start - really interested to see where you are going with this.

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [10 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from spurious
Review:
promising. need more. thanks.
Review By [spurious] • Date [9 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from hand
Review:
I totally love this! I hope you update soon and often.
Comments from author:
Yay, so happy you like! I'm not so fast, but I'm trying to make the chapters longer to make up for any delays.
Review By [hand] • Date [9 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from Alianna
Review:
cool story!
Comments from author:
THANK YOU!!
Review By [Alianna] • Date [9 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from nightslayer
Review:
loved it!! and i hope to read more, xanders so cute as a child, and this new gift really makes sences, 'the one who sees', totaly get it.
Comments from author:
Hooray for your "special gift" spotting skills! And I know, chibi Xander, I just wanna pick him up and squeeze him, not that he'd let me. More cuteness ahead!
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [9 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from periskyye
Review:
Seems likes a good start; I'm definitely interested in where this goes from here.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, I promise in the next chapter I'll try to put some anita regulars in.
Review By [periskyye] • Date [9 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from Chaos
Review:
Great start! I loved Xander's ability to see into people. After all, he is the One Who Sees. I think you have the beginnings of a great story with lots of detail and uniqueness, like Xander being head shy.

This is definitely going on my tracking list.

I hope to see your next update soon. The sooner the better! :D
Comments from author:
YES!! I was hoping someone would catch the whole One Who See's ness Xander is starting to manifest. And yes, I am proud of the head shy thing. It made sense to me. Besides, flawed characters are interesting. I'm writting as fast as I can...which isn't as impressive as it sounds.
Review By [Chaos] • Date [9 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Very interesting beginning.
Comments from author:
Yay, thanks for reviewing!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [9 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whole New World" from purrfus
Review:
Intriguing.

Exiting a difficult past into a hopefully more pleasant though certainly no less chaotic future.
Comments from author:
Hmm, more pleasant. Well, Xander will be kinda traumatized from his past life, but there'll be a ton of cool people to support him. Not that it'll be hard, he's just so darn cute! Chaos ahead!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [9 May 07] • Not Rated
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