"Potato, potato," came the reply. (A/N: po-tay-to, po-tah-to)
advice, just put po-tay-to, po-tah-to in the story. Authors notes in the story tend to annoy people and it would just be simpler. Otherwise, you have a great story!!!! I'm loving every step of the way, and I can't wait to see more.
Mmm, yum. Oh, what? Oh, I really like how this story is going. I like your Anya spirit. Might want to have Xander check on Narcissus, make sure he's not silently rebelling. You know how some people are. ;-)
Comments from author:
Yeah, well, if Narc knows what's good for him, she'll behave himself or Xander will have to beat her like a bitch.
HELL YEAH THAT'S HOT! WOW, wait does cordy get to be in the middle? Come on at least once b4 she leaves or whatever. *begs*
Later and Love Bunney
Comments from author:
I don't know about that, but I hope that this chapter sheds some light on your question about why Cordy is there. I'm still working out the details and I'm trying to avoid a prophecy (haven't the foggiest on how to write a good one), but I'll muddle through somehow.
wait! Why did cordy show up I totally have to have missed stuff or is this your forshadowing...hmmm...i will wait fir the next chapter and fnd out...hopefully, cuz you might be evil and make me wait!