Pretty good story, keep up the excellent work. :) I'm not really fond of the whole "mating instinct" plot device in general, in some cases I've seen it greatly misused, and even when it's not misused it just feels like the author is cutting corners to make the relationship happen faster, or is forcing it. This fic isn't so bad though in that respect I guess.
Anyway, this is a really pretty good fic, and I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Even though they did do the mating early on in their relationship, I'm trying to get them on dates and getting to know each other as well.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from clarityfades
Review:
Good to see you back with the story (& nice to know you haven't given up--though I didn't think you had ;)). & great chapter progressing the story. Glad to see them out exploring & hopefully gaining the information/knowledge needed.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
SlayerandWereLeopard
draconin
