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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from queenevil
maybe he could be friends with buffy:)
Review By [queenevil] • Date [29 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from CPTSkip
I am enjoying your story. It is moving very fast, but then we who have seen the show already know the basic plot points. Now I look forward to seeing how the Scoobies screw eveything up. But in a GOOD way, of course. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from mithrilandtj
I like Buffy's Atlantis history.

Don't pair up Buffy and Willow. There are SO many more people for Willow to choose from.

Hell I can see her switching sides again and going after Rodney. ;) Match geniuses babble for babble. He does it too, he just has to breathe more. :-D

And I always thought Buffy and Sheppard would make a good match.
Comments from author:
Sorry, I'm not that much of a McKay fan. If she gets paired, she'll end up with either Teyla or Ronin.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [29 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from GypsyRaven
Can I just say how much I love the continual updates? Sorry... just get tired of hooking into a story that, after a few posts just sits there for months or longer!

Still enjoying the vibe... I have a feeling I might see where this is going, and I'm really looking forward to finding out if I'm right.

Side note? Thanks for giving Willow a spine again. The whole Kennedy situation always confused me.
Review By [GypsyRaven] • Date [29 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from arkeus
Hum...Willow/Teyla/Buffy? Could be fun :-)
anyway, another nice chapter. thanks to have answered the hundred years question, though it is surprising how the ancient decide to interevene.
Comments from author:
They didn't, unless Oma was an Ancient (considering how much she interferes, I seriously doubt it. I think she was someone like Daniel, who just really deserved it). Everything was set up by Oma Desala and Tara. Buffy only went back 100, the Ancients left Atlantic long before then.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [29 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from arkeus
hum...strange, there was no mention of the 100 years gap Oo?
really like this story so far :-)
Review By [arkeus] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from arkeus
I was a bit sad you thought the last few paragraphs necessary, it seemed a bit "oh wow" when they themselves did quite a bit. I don't think Sg1 are the type to put hero above other people, as they don't put themselves in such way :-)
Comments from author:
You have to keep in mind that SG-1 are military, trained soldiers, and full grown adults who made a conscious decision to do what they do, and when they feel they've done enough, they can leave it behind. They just found out that some anonymous young girl was simply given super senses and abilities and tossed into a fight she knew nothing about, against monsters that she was always told weren't real, and she's in her first year of high school. Even the draft starts at 18 (I think). And she's lost nearly everything for it.

If you were told that there really were soldiers saving the world from being enslaved, you'd think they were heroes, right. They probably wouldn't see themselves as heroes thought, because it's their duty, it's what they were trained for, and they knew that if they didn't do, no one else would.

It's the same concept here. SG-1 just found out that there is a war going on right there in the back yard, and they never knew about it. And it's being fought by children, who have no choice but to fight because they are all that stands between the humans and the monsters. SG-1 are heroes, but they would never label themselves as heros, and the same goes for Buffy and her friends.

Sorry I went off on you there. I read fanfic a lot and I really like Buffy/Stargate stuff, but they always focus on their disgust on the fact that kids are being forced to fight, and they should, but they should also recognize that what Buffy does is just as heroic as what they do.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from arkeus
This is surprisingly well written, and there seems to be a certain "grown up" feel to the scoobs. Good.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from arkeus
Nice first chapter. I hope that there will be no scooby bashing, as it kind of turn me off :-)
Hum, so the stargate and btvs universe is the same? pity. Wonder why the ancient did not know magic, then, but only evolved "abilities". Oh, and i thought their name was "alterran"" or something akin.
Comments from author:
I don't know why the Ancients didn't know magic, but not all humans have the ability either.

'Alteran' is one of the names for the Ancients, so is Anqueetas. I found it on wikipedia and apparently, it's been mentioned in one of the SG-1 episodes where Jack got the Ancient database downloaded into his brain.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Really like the way this story is shaping up - hope its going to be a long one!
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [28 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from mithrilandtj
I like the memory photos.

How would the Gene affect Willow's powers?
Comments from author:
I'm not sure yet. I'm not even sure if I want to find out. Still considering options.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [27 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from RevDorothyL
Aww! Nice family reunion. Plus, I love the selection of "memory photos" that Buffy was able to collect.
Comments from author:
I figured she needed something. I thought of memory photos because I was thinking of something when I was writing this, and realized that the greatest photo opportunities always happen when you don't have a camera.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from RevDorothyL
A really intriguing idea, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it plays out.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Current Donor)Tempi
I really look forward to reading more of this story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [27 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from mithrilandtj

Did notice a minor error.
(One year later, Willow managed to bring Buffy back to life since she died a mystical death,)
Buffy was only death about 4 or 5 months. Spike had told her she had been dead for 100+ days.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [27 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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