This story is funny in all the right places and accurate too. I'm hooked. Loved the tentacles line. So glad Spike is there. I love Spike. Will be on the lookout for more.
Review By [dizzyspirit] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Pretty fun stuff, however, I think River could use just a tablespoon more of Crazy, since she doesn't get fixed until toward the end of Serenity in the timeline.
I like this fic a lot, especially how Dawn's a twin... YAY! Oh, and now Dawn can make the smoochies with Spike and River with Jayne... or WILL they... hmm??
Review By [MusicalKiller] • Date [14 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Good job of summarizing everything in the buffyverse in a short amount of space. You kept it short, sweet and to the point rather than rambling on for pages. I am still loving the fact that you brought in Spike and Illyria.
Review By [aerialla] • Date [11 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
~"There's a smoochies plan?" Mal asked. "Gorramit, now I really need a drink."~
Hahahahahaha. This fic is really great- I love the direction you've taken, and your depiction of the Dawn/River twin relationship is awesome. I love the little bits of Jayne, Simon, and Mal torture scattered throughout, and though Illyria and Spike are common Firefly fic players, I think they make an interesting addition here.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [10 Aug 07] • Not Rated
::giggles, blinks a little, and then giggles some more, which turns into full bouts of laughter:: Smoochies plan! Hahahaha! XD Awww, Spike is going to help Dawn! XD Yay! Never thought the day would come where Dawn becomes a slayer. Whoot! Can't wait for another update. I'll be on the look out like usual! ^_^
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [10 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Super cool! Great continuation from the last chapter to this one.
It's always hard to do the explanation thing is never exactly fun, because it's been done a million times. This was alright, although Dawn is clearly fogetting that giving these people names like they know what she's talking about probably confuses things further (Xander, Angel...)
I'll keep reading. Thanks for the update!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [9 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Snag
