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Review of chapter "Patrol" from TorturedAngel
Review:
wow cool! :)
Comments from author:
Haha thanks much :)
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [7 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Patrol" from Jelise
Review:
Hey, I am so glad you chose that for his powers! I'm kind of a pyro though so...hehehe. Anyways, Awesome chapter, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens between Spike and the Xan-man. *gives two thumbs up*
Comments from author:
Yeah i know thank you for that suggestion. I'm kind of a pyro also, haha. I'm glad you liked that last chapter, it took me forever to write. Thanks for the review. More soon I hope.
Review By [Jelise] • Date [6 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Patrol" from mysticmars
Review:
i really like this story but i'm having some problems. the site says there is a chapter five but when i go into the story it only goes up to chapter four. i was really looking forward to the next chapter. i hope it will be fixed soon so i can continue to read this story.
Comments from author:
Actually the 4th chapter was an authors note that I did. It went against tth's rules so I had to delete it. So now there's 4 chapters and I'm working on the fifth. Hopefully I can get it up some time today. Thanks for the review, I'm glad your enjoying the story.
Review By [mysticmars] • Date [6 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Patrol" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Yay, its Willow!!! I love Willow! Ooo, and wicked cool powers for Dean! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Comments from author:
Yeah I love witchy Willow too. Thank you for the comment. Hopefully I can get the next chapter out sometime today.
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [6 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Patrol" from nightslayer
Review:
hmmm. . . i can't comment, i'm crying to hard!
Comments from author:
Sorry about that I think it was because my story got a quarantine put on it, its fixed now.
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [6 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of story "It's All Relative" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Ooo, I like it!!! Hmmm, for Dean's power...I'm not really sure. Maybe telekinesis? Or maybe he could be kinda witch-y like Willow? So, Dean/Faith and Xan/Spike are definite pairings? That's cool, I like those. Any ideas on who you'll pair Sam up with? Maybe Dawn or Connor? Though I must say I think I'd prefer to see him with Connor in this one as it would make for a nice change since there's so many Sam/Dawn stories and not nearly enough stories with Connor in them! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! More soon, please?

~ Kyra
Comments from author:
Yay! Thanks so much Kyra. I'm glad your enjoying the story. I just posted the new story and it has Dean's power is there. I'm happy you aprove of my pairings. :) I have two ideas for Sam's pairing. It's not Dawn as I don't really like Dawn/Sam. As for Connor, I don't think I'll bring in any characters from Angel, I'm having enough trouble juggling all the characters I have now as it is, and there's two more coming, so sorry about that. I really enjoy Connor also, we'll see if he makes an appearance in here, who knows right. Well the new chapter is posted, hope you enjoy. Off to work on the next one. Tootles.

~Kai
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [6 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "It's All Relative" from nightslayer
Review:
my best advice is to ignore 'redundent' comments. You know the 'rapist' comments. These are people who don't have a opened mind and everything has to be perfect. In EVERY fanfiction i have ever read there has been OOCness of main characters. Its natural, your writing based on 'what you think' they would do in the sitiuation your putting them in. I personal like your story, and think your doing an amazing job keeping with the characters. Xander has proven time and time again to be slightly emotional when it comes to family so his actions arn't weird or anything.

hope to see an update soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the comment. I just figured out what ooc meant after I read your comment. So i'm going with everyones advice and keep writing how I'm writing. More coming soon. Thank you once again.
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [5 Jun 07] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "It's All Relative" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I like this story very much. I like the brothers' interactions with each other. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Yay, thanks so much. I always get a big cheesy grin whenever I get a review. Glad your enjoying it. There may be more tonight. Working on the next chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "It's All Relative" from kazeko
Review:
I would like to point out...in answer to that last comment about Xander. That while your Xander is not spot on canon Xander for the time frame (he is however a good young Xan) You should keep in mind 3 things
1) Where Xander cuts Spike off and then watches him leave *is* a typical Xan Move
2) This is a crossover meaning *alternate* reality
and most importantly
3) This is *YOUR* fanfiction... and you are doing a great job.

The person who said slow down was right it is the best way to correct/catch mistakes.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much on your supportive/constuctive help. I really do appreciate it. I'm taking the time to write the next chapter and its kicking my ass, so many characters that I'm having trouble making them sound like them. But like you said its an alternate reality and I dont really like canon Xander he was kinda potrayed as the loser/clown. So I'll do my best and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Review By [kazeko] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Meet and Greet" from TorturedAngel
Review:
great start :)
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet and Greet" from Morrigan
Review:
Ooohhhh ..... *___* a new chapter!!!

I thought that went they were going to Gile's office they'd talk about Dean's problem with the demon stuff, but it seems it went under the carpet too soon.

Anyway, Dean must do everything in his power to get Xanpet and Spike together (is his responsibility as a big brother after all ^.~)


As for a superpower.... I don't know. Since Sam and Xander have "brainy" powers (psychic, seer) it should be something around that, ne?

Thank you for the chapter!
more soon please?
Review By [Morrigan] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet and Greet" from Jelise
Review:
Some mistakes. I noticed once you had some instead of come. I do not remember quiet where in the story. Only advice I can give for small mistakes like that is to reread every sentence at least twice...once being out loud.

Anyways, the only powers I can think of that a protector would use are passive ones, and Dean passive...uh-uh. I think he'd rather die then be able to make barriers. He needs something less...what he would think of as girly. So...that leaves us with...elemental powers like control of water, air, fire or earth. The only one I can see Dean being is fire. Water and air are the more passive of the powers, and I really can't see him being calm enough to be earth. You can also give him heightened senses, or strength to where he can be strong enough to contend with a slayer. You can give him animalistic instincts or...yeah. Go along with it, cuz girl I AM LOVING THIS STORY....

Also, Dean and Faith = HAWT
Review By [Jelise] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet and Greet" from nightslayer
Review:
you should pair sam and giles together. I know theres a big age diffrence but i think it would be sweet to see giles all protective of sam.
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reunited" from Morrigan
Review:
I see the boys must get up to date eh?

Please, please, please, more soon??
I hope Spike and Xander get together

Hugs!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much. You're review made me smile. More coming soon. And spike and xander will happen, just dont know how yet.
Review By [Morrigan] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reunited" from nightslayer
Review:
i like. . .
Comments from author:
Thanks so much, I appreciate it. :)
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [3 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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