Truly excellent, I am still grinning.
Too many good things to point out but,

Great dialog:
“You take fly boy B, Red – Blondie is all yours, me.. I get tall and chocolate.” Faith tossed as she moved.

“Hey since when does she give orders?” muttered Buffy as she moved towards Jack.

Jack was still trying to figure out how he had lost the situation quite so quickly, but he was never slow on the draw. “Teal’c take care of the brunette, I’ve got the Blonde, Carter secure the prisoner.”
*ah, the plans of mice and men…*
Loved it.

Cordy’s post possession rant.

Thank you for sharing.

That was great - I loved Cordelia's reaction at the end. Buffy cordy was so much better than Angel cordy. Thanks for writing it.

Shieldage was right about the lack of breaks on scene changes though - it needs larger gaps to make it obivous where one occurs.

yeha.. that is where C&P eats my formatting.... but did you enjoy? Sorry your half wimped out on you so I tried to meet all your stuff, even the snyder part... and hey you almost got your slayer/human.. .kinda...

ROTFLMAO!!!!! I could so see all of that happening - priceless! Lol now SG1 has to explain what happened to Hammond... *snicker*

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect

~snickers~ I can see Jacks report

Found Sunnydale
found snake outside body
captured snake
left sunnydale
end report

Indeed, quite the good fic.

James

"a study of Sumerian fiction" Hey, that's a nice phrase. Now, I think I'll use 'a study of Sumerian comic books' in one of my fics... :)

Very good.

Poor Daniel missing the action.

One nitpick though. In the first half, when you're switching between teams, could you 'double-return' instead of 'single-return' between viewpoints?

Well done!

this was so funny. a host in cordy. that's a good premise.
great writing. :)

Bravo! That is just flat out wonderful! I would love to see more of this!

oh my God!!! That was awesome!!!

Fantastic. Thanks for sharing. Worth continuing in this continuity, even if it is a few years later instead of right later.

~sncikers~ thanks... but like I said just a pinch hit to give jrabbit something to smile over

This was great. It would be interesting to see more of this story line in the future.

I doubt it... but maybe.. ~lol~ might do a drabble Sam running into Cordy.. ~lol~ why oh why did they have to kill her... ~sighs~

I'm giggling madly over here

I loved this story! That was one stupid little worm trying to take over Cordelia. ::heh::

great!
You wrote Cordy very well; i would pay to see her yell in the snake's ugly face like that :D
terrific