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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
"So you guys sure I can't test out Chocolate's moves there? I am sure he would enjoy." She called as they headed to the parking lot.

"Indeed O'Neill I quite believe she may be most skilled in that arena, are you sure I can't… accept her offer."

ROTFLMAO!

I think this calls for Faith kidnapping Murry!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jadecat
Review:
Truly excellent, I am still grinning.
Too many good things to point out but,

Great dialog:
“You take fly boy B, Red – Blondie is all yours, me.. I get tall and chocolate.” Faith tossed as she moved.

“Hey since when does she give orders?” muttered Buffy as she moved towards Jack.

Jack was still trying to figure out how he had lost the situation quite so quickly, but he was never slow on the draw. “Teal’c take care of the brunette, I’ve got the Blonde, Carter secure the prisoner.”
*ah, the plans of mice and men…*
Loved it.

Cordy’s post possession rant.

Thank you for sharing.
Review By [jadecat] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
That was great - I loved Cordelia's reaction at the end. Buffy cordy was so much better than Angel cordy. Thanks for writing it.

Shieldage was right about the lack of breaks on scene changes though - it needs larger gaps to make it obivous where one occurs.
Comments from author:
yeha.. that is where C&P eats my formatting.... but did you enjoy? Sorry your half wimped out on you so I tried to meet all your stuff, even the snyder part... and hey you almost got your slayer/human.. .kinda...
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bumpkin
Review:
ROTFLMAO!!!!! I could so see all of that happening - priceless! Lol now SG1 has to explain what happened to Hammond... *snicker*

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Comments from author:
~snickers~ I can see Jacks report

Found Sunnydale
found snake outside body
captured snake
left sunnydale
end report
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Indeed, quite the good fic.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
"a study of Sumerian fiction" Hey, that's a nice phrase. Now, I think I'll use 'a study of Sumerian comic books' in one of my fics... :)

Very good.

Poor Daniel missing the action.

One nitpick though. In the first half, when you're switching between teams, could you 'double-return' instead of 'single-return' between viewpoints?
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
Review:
Well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kiwi
Review:
this was so funny. a host in cordy. that's a good premise.
great writing. :)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Twoboots
Review:
Bravo! That is just flat out wonderful! I would love to see more of this!
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marita
Review:
oh my God!!! That was awesome!!!
Review By [Marita] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Fantastic. Thanks for sharing. Worth continuing in this continuity, even if it is a few years later instead of right later.
Comments from author:
~sncikers~ thanks... but like I said just a pinch hit to give jrabbit something to smile over
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vorax
Review:
This was great. It would be interesting to see more of this story line in the future.
Comments from author:
I doubt it... but maybe.. ~lol~ might do a drabble Sam running into Cordy.. ~lol~ why oh why did they have to kill her... ~sighs~
Review By [Vorax] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Noclaf
Review:
I'm giggling madly over here
Review By [Noclaf] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I loved this story! That was one stupid little worm trying to take over Cordelia. ::heh::
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from pezgirl
Review:
great!
You wrote Cordy very well; i would pay to see her yell in the snake's ugly face like that :D
terrific
Review By [pezgirl] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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