Cool. And different. Good different. Have I mentioned different? Usually it is Buffy who is Mary, I like this. And I think John will get just the kick he needs. Dawn is probably going to go postal on him. Snigger.
Review By [feekh] • Date [21 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
OMG!!!!!! Please write more!!!! I love where you're going with this story. I can't wait to read more. Is this going to be a Dawn/John story? I can't wait to read about them all meeting and some mother/ son(s) interaction.
Review By [paradiso] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
LOL...I love it...now the Dean/Dawn or Sam/Dawn stories are OK I always like the strange pairings and well John/Dawn is well different and as always I look forward to the next part.
Review By [morgyair] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
So cool! I wonder what John is going to feel like to have Dawn as a wife (or whatever you make them). Dawn knows about the supernatural and I bet she'd be good with him (slap him upside the head when he needs it). Yay! Super yay!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This fic is only the first chapter and I've already fallen in love with it. Love how you write the beginning. Please put up the next chapter fast. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Review By [link] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Dawn as Mary? Thats a spin I haven't seen yet. Buffy is going to be so mad when she finds out about John and the boys. And she probably will blame Willow, cause Wills did the spell.
The flow of this story is just great. You're such a great writer, all your stuff manages to grab me right off. Can't wait for more!
Review By [KitKat] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Dawn as the Winchester's mother? Hmm, could have some potential, although I was thinking it was going to be a Dawn/Dean pairing or something. You have me hooked on yet another one of your fabulous stories, Sevangel! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
-Druid
Review By [DruidLass] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I am so excited! This story seems like it's going to be awesome. Is Willow going to be very involved with this story? I hope so because she's always amusing and I think she would do good with one of the boys. Buffy is going to freak when she finds out Dawn's married and has two kids. I can't wait. Hope you update soon!
Review By [witchywitch] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
morgyair
