Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from somethintosay
Love this story to pieces!!
It's such a great concept, and you write the Winchesters so well.
I can't wait for an update!
Review By [somethintosay
] • Date [28 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from VivianCaidin
I'm looking forward to the next chapter in the story.
Can't wait to see the byplay of interaction between the Winchesters and the Scoobies.
Review By [VivianCaidin
] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from ariakiara
Hey there, I just wanted to drop a line saying that I've absolutely loved this story. I don't think I've ever actually seen this premise before but its quite captivating. I just love your Dawn and think she comes across as such an interesting blend of people. Can't wait for an update!
Review By [ariakiara
] • Date [11 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Nightofthecreeps
Another story i love and would kill for you to update you should i didn't think i would like this story but i do it's so wonderful plus i love dawn anyway
Review By [Nightofthecreeps
] • Date [30 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from immortalwizardelffan
You know now that the episode "In the Beginning" has aired and we know more abou Mary.... i.e. she was a hunter, as were her dad and mom.... you have more around to play with.
John said Mary wouldn't have approved... which is true, after all she specifically told Dean to his face in the episode, not knowing he was her future son, that she didn't want her children to be hunters.
Also, maybe she could have Angel and Gunn get her boys out of trouble with the law?
Review By [immortalwizardelffan
] • Date [4 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Silver
I just found this...and almost didn't read it because I really don't like reading stories that were last updated in 2007. Most of the time they NEVER are updated. I'm glad I did, because I have read some Supernatural/Buffy Crossovers and this is the first I can remember that has the twist that you added...Dawn as Mary?? Awesome!!!! Just adore the way that Sam & Dean get all weirded out by Dawn and John's sexual references/innuendoes. I just wnat to know... will you please update this sometime??? and how about The Key, The dark-Hunter, and the Link? Are you going to update that anytime soon?? I know reall life gets in the way sometimes. Please update both of these soonest! Thanks!
Review By [Silver
] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from banner
This story is so much fun. I love watching Mary and John torture their sons with the sex talk. You show their characters so clearly: their strength and their flaws.
Review By [banner
] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from HiltonK
Great stuff, if you ever feel like adding more..... :0)
Review By [HiltonK
] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Kristal
Oh! I love it! And you haven't updated in 9 months. Please say you remember this and add some more- its adorable and cute and oh so lovely. But yes, continue ASAP! WRITE NOW!
Review By [Kristal
] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Kirallie
Good work! Glad she got to talk to Dean. Poor John having to deal with her. How much will Mary overide Dawn personality and memory wise?
Review By [Kirallie
] • Date [7 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Dragonelf
I hope you will get inspired to continue this story.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Rivulet
I like how Dawn and John are resettling into their relationship. Yeah for the demon being defeated and Wes worrying in the begining. Wonderful conversation between Dean and Dawn, and her points about how she understands what he's going through. It's nice how you bring in both Mary's background and Dawn's background to make her one person.
Review By [Rivulet
] • Date [22 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from kayron
Dawn is Mary. I like that. I would also like to see how the Winchester men will handle meeting Dawn/Mary's "other" family (including vampires, slayers, watchers, and a Xander). :o) The Y.E.D. is bound to come back. Will they find some way to destroy him? I would love to read more. I hope the story is continued.
Review By [kayron
] • Date [18 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from AonGealach
YOu know, I absolutely LOVE ALL of your Dawn fics! The Key..., House's Key..., and In my time. I love all three of these and each step farther into each story makes me love them that much more!!! I wish you would update again each of them soon because I just love them that much!!!
Review By [AonGealach
] • Date [30 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from betrayal
I've never thought much about this to characters or about Dawn's soul, but damn, you make it work! keep up the amazing job.
Review By [betrayal
] • Date [23 Mar 08] • Not Rated