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Review of chapter "Conversations" from JoeDineen
Review:
Nice interlude, loved the Anya Cordy conversation, look forward to more.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [9 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations" from war
Review:
ah Angel and Spike stuck in a room recovering from wounds received by Buffy, that just warms my heart.

if Cordy wants to get closer to angel hope she's figured out a way around that pesky curse.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [9 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn" from Greywizard
Review:
Interesting development here, man.

Is it the implants and memory/mental conditioning Buffy/Xi has undergone or is it the fact that her personality has been split and is currently fragmentary that has made her resistant to the spell the monks have cast and prevented her from recognizing Dawn as her sister?

Love this story, man, and looking forward to seeing more of it.

John
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [7 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, new chapter.

::Feeds the plot bunny::

I hope that Buffy will remember Dawn.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [7 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from SAK
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Will Buffy remember Dawn at all or will the monks spell update her memories?

Please update again soon.
Review By [SAK] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude" from Dragonelf
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::Feeds the plot bunny::



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Shadow is the diminution alike of light and of
darkness, and stands between darkness and light.
-- Leonardo da Vinci
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from misterq
Review:
Excellent update, and excellent too that you're feeling better! I can hardly wait for the conclusion of the Dawn/Xi meeting. Great Work!
Review By [misterq] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am so glad that your health is better than 'worse case'. I know it is selfish of me, but I enjoy your stories and look forward to many more years of entertainment coming from your wonderful imagination. Nice update and I look forward to more with great anticipation.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from Greywizard
Review:
Excellent!!

Glad to see another chapter, my friend, and very glad that things seem to be proceeding as well as can be expected/hoped for with your health problems.

Looking forward to seeing Dawn's reaction to the revelation of Buffy's return. Not sure what's going to happen with that, but I'm sure that things aren't going to go nearly as smoothly as they might hope. ;-)

Good job.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Taking a Break" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, a new chapter. I hope every thing works out well for you and hopefully the doctor will give you good news.

::Feeds the plot bunny and gives the author a virtual good luck charm::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Taking a Break" from JoeDineen
Review:
Story pretty interesting so far. I am looking forward to how it is all resolved and I hope every thing works out well for you.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rise and Shine" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rise and Shine" from asqwerth
Review:
So when Buffy feels guilt for the bad things she's done due to her brainwashing and the emotional blackmail imposed on her, it's all, "oh, poor Buffy, we've got to keep an eye on her"?

Will this make Xander feel more sympathetic towards Angel for his guilt for all the bad things that his demon did? It's one thing to say he doesn't like him because he's a vampire, but it's not the vamp in control currently but the soul, isn't it? Just like how they all hope for BAS' return to Xi's body. And it's not abt being worried that the curse will be broken again, because Xander didn't seem to like him, even before knowing abt the curse's proviso.

Curious to see how you address this aspect of Xander's character, because I always felt many pro-Xander stories maintain his dislike for Angel and try to justify it (as being correct and righteous) in ways that sometimes are not reasonable/logical to me. Sometimes it seems to me it's just so that Buffy and Xander can hook up.

I'm not a shipper, so for me it's not about whether Buffy should be with Angel or Xander; regardless of what relationships form/break in this story, I would just like to see a story where Xander truly matures in his thinking.
Review By [asqwerth] • Date [5 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rise and Shine" from Greywizard
Review:
Another great chapter here, man.

Had to laugh at the way the Scoobies and the Fang Gang found out that Buffy is, indeed, related to Scott Summers. ;-)

Looking forward to seeing what comes next.

Good job.
Comments from author:
As always it is good to know you like this story. Thanks.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [5 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Innermost Thoughts Revealed" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent job of showing what Buffy was thinking those first couple of seasons. Totally logical and totally in character. This is a great story and I look forward to more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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