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Review of chapter "Here There Be Monsters" from Greywizard
Review:
Had to laugh (literally) at the way Xander so nonchalantly listed all the possession and possession-like experiences that he and Buffy had lived through in response to Xavier's question. ;-)

I also imagine that the Poor Professor will be giving a *great* deal of thought to everything the Scoobies have experienced, once he and Xander finally emerge triumphant from the recesses of Buffy's mind. ;-)

And since he knows that Alpha and Soldier Guy are basically alternate aspects of his own personality, why does Xander think, even for a moment, that they're gonna do what he says and stay behind, while he and Xavier explore Buffy's psyche? ;-)

Also, how does the time Xander and Xavier experience compare to the time the Scoobies and the Fang Gang experience while waiting for them? Is it a one to one ratio, does time pass faster in the psychic realm, or is completely variable, depending upon what's happening to the visitors?

All in all, another excellent chapter, man. Looking forward to what's coming up next for everyone.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Here There Be Monsters" from Mcspender
Review:
Why do I think that Soldier and Alpha are gonna trow a party Now that Xander is traveling ;) ?.
Cool chapter!.

See ya!!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What’s Best" from war
Review:
SGT Hills is quick thinking NCO ,brave to saying no to that room.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What’s Best" from Iceflame
Review:
You've got my attention, managing to balance fairly well. Still not happy at the B/X overtones, but so far you've managed to weave everything together well enough to overshadow that annoying detail :-D.

Nice cliffhanger with Faith there. Keeps me hoping against hope that there might still be a shot at B/X/F. That WOULD make this story even more unique (haven't seen any serious stories with that pairing yet).
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preparation" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [16 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preparation" from Mcspender
Review:
Hill`s right, she can't be the one who helps Buffy, maybe Xander or Joyce, but no Hill.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [16 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hail, Hail the Gang’s All Here" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [10 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hail, Hail the Gang’s All Here" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hail, Hail the Gang’s All Here" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
I have enjoyed the story for a long time, but I have a question. How did Joyce know Logan's last name when no one mentioned it?
Comments from author:
Reread chapter 30. You'll find he and the other X-Men were introduced to her and Giles when they stopped into the shop.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Explanations" from EricThorsen
Review:
Really good story, especially the reasoned actions of the characters and the reasonable motivations. I would personally have put this in the X-men section, but I can understand, since the X-men are only peripheral to the story why you wouldn't. I also liked your way of moving Xander through the story. Good work so far, keep it up.
Review By [EricThorsen] • Date [4 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Explanations" from axolotl
Review:
I like 134.. I like this turnaround and really hope hennesy and hill remain in the story even when things get sorted, this was an excellent chapter.
Review By [axolotl] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Explanations" from Dragonelf
Review:
...someone called ‘One Who Will Guide’ to do that because...

This sounds suspiciously a lot like Professor Xavier as he teaches young mutants how to control their powers as well as being a very experienced and powerful telepath.

::Feeds the plot bunny and gives the muse a bottle of encouragement juice::

I hope we will see you inspired to write a multitude of new chapters.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting The Family" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
Ooh, nice update. That's too funny that Cordy actually did keep Angel and Spike in the room with a super soaker. I think that I was expecting a little bit more of a dramatic build-up before bringing Buffy in, but I suppose that Xander was trying to avoid as much drama as possible.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [26 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting The Family" from war
Review:
should be interesting to see everyones reaction to that.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [26 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting The Family" from axolotl
Review:
Yay- the reveal, not the fallout but hopefully te X-men can get in on that action.
Review By [axolotl] • Date [26 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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