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Review of chapter "Outcomes" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Outcomes" from RafMereC
Review:
Nice update.

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [2 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Departure" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Departure" from Greywizard
Review:
It may seem like I'm bashing Angel, but I can very easily see him trying to ruin things for Xander out of jealousy for his clearly superior emotional edge with Buffy - even though she doesn't know who she is yet. The so-called 'ensouled vampire' always made me angry with his 'me first and the hell with anyone else' attitude, most especially when he refused to help out unless coerced into doing do. He was a coward, first and foremost, and refused to take any risks with regard to his own skin unless he thought it could possibly help him improve his image in Buffy's eyes.

Xavier seems to be trying to do his best to set things up for Buffy's recovery, but I also don't trust him to not take maximum advantage of Buffy's situation if he thinks it could help him in the slightest way.

Ross may be considered honorable, but he's still basically an arrogant bully and a complete asshole, who tries to force people to do what he thinks is best, while typically not having a full understanding of the situation he's trying to control.

I like the complexity you've established here,and am looking forward to seeing how things get resolved.

Thanks for sharing this with us, man.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Departure" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
interesting update. I am really curious as to why the personalities will not mesh..
Comments from author:
They currently are too use being individuals plus adult Buffy needs to be recovered first.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Departure" from FireWolfe
Review:
Very good update. Its a little dark and a little worrysome the way Buffy is so disconnected. However the flow and actions of the characters seem to be holding true to form. I have enjoyed it a lot and hope yo update as time allows.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Departure" from war
Review:
Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Departure" from greenfalcon
Review:
Glad to see this story added to had to go back and reread the rest of it but still a great story hope inspiration stay's with you
Review By [greenfalcon] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Departure" from grd
Review:
Very very happy to see another chapter. Thank you. Intrigued by Dawn's relation to Faith
Review By [grd] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Plan" from Markelo
Review:
Cool story. I like it!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [18 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Plan" from draconis
Review:
Thanks for another great update. Only "complaint" is they're too short!

I'm also keen on the point made in the "eckles" review re: Hair-Gel guy. Because the Hyperion is still being used, I'm assuming this has been all pre-Angel offered to run Wolfram and Hart to this point, right? Although that could really put a spin on the dynamics if that offer comes about while all this is going on.

I'm also wondering if the Watcher's Council may become one of the "foreign interests" that will figure out (or be told) of the changes to Buffy.

Buffy's recuperation and integration now seems more like the rehabilitation of a survivor of severe physical brain trauma/stroke/etc, and her family learning how to relate to the basically all new person that emerges. Perhaps Joyce and the others could get some help from existing support groups instead of just relying on Xavier's limited knowledge in this area? It's not necessarily just Buffy that will need the help and education.
Review By [draconis] • Date [1 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Plan" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [31 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Plan" from eckles
Review:
It seems as though Xavier and Giles have ticked all the right boxes in giving Buffy a chance to return to a semi-balance of 'normal' after everything she had been subjected too. I am very interested in learning the identity of the male in the group who was wishing Xander ill, with respects to him going AWOL from the Hulk Brigade. Off the top of my head I can only think of one person who would have that level of investment. From Holmes to Poirot, they always say that you must look to who benefits the most. And in this instance I can only think of one. A certain Vampire with a soul who wears far too much hair gel. Presently Xander is the Sun that Buffy gravitates around thanks to the conditioning of Stryker's brainwashing. I do not think it would be easy for Angel to handle discovering that of all the people in Buffy's life, from himself all the way to Giles, that Stryker was able to distinguish Xander as Buffy's greatest motivation. I am certain Angel is believing that the sooner Xander is back at base, and possibly with all future leave revoked due to punishment for his desertion, that he could maybe reclaim some ground. That also opens a very interesting question, what will happen to Buffy if Xander and the others of Srtyker's Team return back to the Army? She will be left with just the Scooby's and the X-Men. Without her 'support network' present, is it possible she could decompensate? Take steps back with her progress if she believes Xander has abandoned her?

Would love to hear from you.

Wayne
Review By [eckles] • Date [31 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Plan" from grd
Review:
Go Professor X being all mysterious and revealing. Too bad Riley and Walsh are dead. Hope they are roasting someplace warm.
Review By [grd] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Plan" from borgrabbit
Review:
Mundane haiku:

Some exposition
And some more exposition
Needed but I snooze



Just kidding. Good chapter!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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