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Review of chapter "Your Not Yourself Tonight" from LadyFoxFire
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Beckett is stuck in Dean's body for a year! Oh poor Dean he'll have so much work to do to build his image back up
Comments from author:
Glad you are along for the ride, more soon.

It might be worse for Dean stuck in the QL project facility bored to tears
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [1 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Road to Nowhere" from VillageOrchid
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I like how you established that having Dean's soul not conveniently in his body is giving the deamons pause. They don't seem creative enough to think that Dean's soul might be somewhere to be found, just that perhaps it may return to Dean's body at some time, and then they can get it. This past chapter was quite a wonderful character study, and I like how you have Sam Becket thinking that they can't all be crazy - getting ready to apply some Holmsian deduction any moment now -- even if he can't figure the whole thing out, nor reveal his time travler status. I love that Sam understands most of the "poetry" being thrown his way.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your comments. The demons are coming back because it is too fun to not watch their confusion. Sam Beckett tries to figure things analytically and, well, the SPN 'verse doesn't obey. Bad for him good for Dean.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Road to Nowhere" from (Past Donor)Mari
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I really enjoyed this chapter. Sam catching Beckett talking to Al, tying him up, and Sam and Dawn trying to exorcise him, combined with Beckett calmly stating that they were delusional and he was Dean there to help them was several kinds of splendid.
Comments from author:
Thankyou. You flatter me. i had alot of fun with this chapter and i am glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Road to Nowhere" from LadyFoxFire
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I think the best part of this fic is how you're slowly driving Sam Beckett crazy with frustration. Will the Crossroad Demon be popping up soon?
Comments from author:
Thank you. You're right because he is a scientist it is going to take a lot to get him to believe. Crossroads demon is coming. Next Chapter.
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Road to Nowhere" from mithrilandtj
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I think Sam B. should just explain the QL project.

Hell, Willow probably read a paper on Becket's work. He's a fellow genius afterall.
Comments from author:
Thanks for coming along with me.

You make a Good point but keep in mind Beckett doesn't think everyone in the Winchester camp is playing with a full deck.
I am going with the idea that he's not going to confess about QL unless he has no choice. And he doesn't know about Willow yet.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So, You Think You Can Tell Heaven From Hell" from VillageOrchid
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I'm enjoying the plot and the interactions.
Comments from author:
I am glad that you liked it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time .. Watch it Fly by as the Pendulum Swings" from VillageOrchid
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Ah, I guesed wrong -- it was Janet that threw me off.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hotel California" from VillageOrchid
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Pretty clear who the surprise crossover is -- only which Sam begs the question.
Comments from author:
I was trying to be mysterious. Because i am all about the surprise. Next chapter should be up tomorrow
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So, You Think You Can Tell Heaven From Hell" from LadyFoxFire
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I can just see Dean give Al the condensed version of what happened. I look forward to the next chapter
Comments from author:
Thanks. Dean just kind of write himself. More should be up tomorrow
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [27 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So, You Think You Can Tell Heaven From Hell" from Melli
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Sam/Dawn is one of my absolute favorite pairings, too! I will occasionally read Dean/Dawn, but I prefer the former. I loved this chapter, I am really looking forward to seeing How Sam is going to manage to save Dean and Sam. I wonder if/when people will realize that 'Dean' isn't Dean? and that Dean isn't crazy or a murderer? Wow, that was confusing. I am all excited to see how Dawn is going to play with this. And I have a question.. Who is Bobby Singer? I am really loving where you are taking this story, and I can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your enthusiasm. Dawn shows up in chapter 6 in person. Bobby Singer is a hunter from Supernatural. I think of him as Dean and Sam's favorite uncle. Though he's not related. If Dean and Sam are in trouble he's the one they turn to. He looks like a trucker but his house is like a library - Giles would love it. In fact, he is kind of like the boys' Giles

I love the idea that outsiders think the boys are dangerous

More chapters soon
Review By [Melli] • Date [27 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Long to the Point of Know Return?" from soleil
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That Becket, here I thought it couldn't get better. Loved the conversation between him and Al.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I love the idea that to outsiders the Winchesters look really bad on paper.
Review By [soleil] • Date [26 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How Long to the Point of Know Return?" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
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Very in love with this. Never saw the Leap coming. brilliant!
Comments from author:
Yeah! I really wanted the QL 'verse to be a surprise. I am so glad it worked for you. thanks
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [25 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time .. Watch it Fly by as the Pendulum Swings" from soleil
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Ok I so didn't see that coming!

I am actually excited to see where you take this and how things will get resolved. Sam Becket helping out the Winchesters. ::jumps up and down::

Very cool first chapters.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I surprised you. I am all about the surprise. Chapter 3 should be up soon. Thanks
Review By [soleil] • Date [25 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Time .. Watch it Fly by as the Pendulum Swings" from LadyFoxFire
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You get a cookie for the most orginal way to save Dean
Comments from author:
Thanks more coming soon
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [25 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time .. Watch it Fly by as the Pendulum Swings" from Melli
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Wow, this is a really great start! I am curious how Dawn (my favorite BtVS character) is going to play into this; and you've done a great job writing Dean, Sam, and well.. Sam. I used to watch Quantum Leap when I was younger, so luckily I am familiar with that 'verse, otherwise I'd be all confused. :-p
I might suggest you giving a short summary of what that show is about for those of us readers who didn't watch it. :-)
It is very well written, you definitely have my interest, and I am really excited to see where you are going with this... Please keep up the great work, and I can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed this :) I have 9 chapters written just trying to edit them up.

I will explain more about Quantum Leap in future chapters but I wanted to to keep the mystery of where Dean was secret for a little bit.
Dawn is coming soon. I am a big Dawn/Sam fan.
Review By [Melli] • Date [25 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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