Review of chapter "Shiny and New" from WillowPaLooza
Review:
You can't end it there! What happens next? I hope you decide to add on to it or make a sequel for it.
Comments from author:
These drabbles would keep going and going if I didn't end it somewhere. It could possibly be continued, it all depends on the prompts over at TtHDrabbles.
Review By [WillowPaLooza] • Date [27 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
*grins* You continue to make me eat my words. Just the other day I gave you a polite request to put everything else aside so that you can focus solely on your Buffy/Mitchell WIP, but that would mean never seeing any additions to this fun little piece! And what a cruel place to leave it! Was Buffy joining up with the SGC? How would the team take to learning the truth about Daniel's new neighbor? And the little scenes you did - WELL DONE! I enjoyed each and every one - and the Come-Fuck-Me-Pumps? *grins* What girl doesn't enjoy a good pair of those kind of pumps? Throw in some hooker boots and you've got yourself a good assortment!
Overall, a fantastic read, drabbles and all!
Comments from author:
I think I own more than one pair of hooker boots. ;-)
Was Buffy joining the SGC? Hmmm, I hope so or she was just waiting around outside Danny's house for the hell of it and that would kinda scream stalker. The 'Fuck me Pumps' see came from an Amy Winehouse song and I enjoyed writing little snippets were the world wasn't about to end and the most horrible thing to happen would be that Buffy ran out of Bacardi for the mijitos.
Glad you liked it and hopefully I can come back to this soon because I'm tempted to write a drabble staring Buffy and Woolsey.
Review By [Lisette] • Date [27 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Fabulous! I love the idea of Daniel looking and trying to figure out exactly *when* he got a hot new neighbor...only to realize he was staring at said neighbor. And getting him drunk? Yes, he has cheap date written all over him. Only teensy compliant...shirt vs. skins with no comments? Terribly unfair...will there be more or is this just a one-off present?
Eeeeeeee! This is utterly brilliant! How very serendipitous that Daniel is Buffy's next door neighbor, and I absolutely love it that you have Vala and Sam becoming Buffy's friends right off. The touch football made me laugh out loud. If you ever decide that you want to write more in this little verse, I would dearly love to read it!
Comments from author:
Thank you!! Vala and Sam shop, we've seen it on the show and thought...hey, Buffy likes to shop. *innocent smile* Vala I think would be the quicker person to be nice to someone new and plus, I just like the Buffy/Vala dynamic. As for the football scene...I was so very tempted to go more than 200 words because I'm firmly in the mindset that the girls won.
There might very well be more to this 'verse. We'll have to wait and see if any of the prompts tickle my muse. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Loved those drabbles, and this style of writing suites you well. Cheers!
Comments from author:
Thank you. My muse likes to write them at the moment but my longer stories are clamoring for attention so fingers crossed that I can focus on them soon.