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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Cheese
Review:
Great :) I really enjoyed your last story, and am looking forward to seeing where this one goes. A fantastic start
Review By [(Past Donor)Cheese] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kiwi
Review:
totally well worth the wait.
wonderfully written as always :)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from traceyw
Review:
oh wow!!!! you're back ye!!!! thank god for this story...... Ive been waiting for this story to hit and it lives up to my expectations... love the Dawn the Bitch story...well done and update soon please!!! Tracey
Review By [traceyw] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Vega
Review:
Yes, yes, yes!!!
Thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)Vega] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Great beginning to the sequel! I can't wait for more! I love how you have set-up an unbeatable Evil and the odds are against them but they are using brains more than brawn to give themselves a chance.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DigiEmissary
Review:
I'm really psyched about this story, especially with the Dawn-centricity; you've captured her character very well. Looking forward to more!
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from atz
Review:
Great to see the sequel!
Review By [atz] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
YAY FINALLY!

I have been EAGERLY awaiting this story!

I love Dawn's escape!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Yes, easier to convince the slayers that the first only took over Buffy a short time ago, rather than never left. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marcel
Review:
It finally happened, it FINALLY happened! [grin]

Yay for a huge first chapter of a great sequel to a great story. Ok, ok, I'm done now :)
Review By [Marcel] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oranda
Review:
I am so happy to finally see this chapter. I was getting a little worried, but the wait was well worth it. Gracie once again shines as a unique slayer and it was great to see Andrew. It goes without saying that I cannot wait to see the next chapter.
Review By [Oranda] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Hell yeaah!!
You are back in full form.!!
This is gonna be such a wild ride.!!
Excellent chapter, each character had their own voice and flow.
Dawn and her skillfully planed escape; Mademoiselle Dominique and her petty view of the world; Grace and her poor self image, but with a courage beyond the norm; the SEAL and his dislike of the slayers, and Andrew, small time moron, big time hustler :D!

Thank you for this excellent beginning.

See ya!!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Inquisitor
Review:
Awesome...thanks for getting this started again...in your earlier posting u mentioned to complete most of the chapters for the sequel of Far Beyond Normal before posting any of them...hopefully this means that we'll be seeing a regular posting schedule for each chapters coming up soon...

someting to consider is that does First possessed Buffy has to die before the First can go to another slayer body...remember in Dogma(Jay&Silent Bob)...Azreal kept God imprisoned in a beaten human body while keeping HER(Alanis MOrissette) in life support to prevent HER from escaping back to heaven...could Andrew copy that same plan to imprison the First possessed Buffy like puitting her in superstrong magic chains within a cement block&gagged while keeping her unconscious with sedatives/cruciamentum drug&alive with IV tubes...the First is essentially stuck in Buffy's body&can't escape to the next slayer line unless Buffy dies...the First then has to fight it out with Dawn in the astral plane...

also what happened to the previous post of Return to Normal prologue when Buffy&the SGC made contact with Dawn in the BTVS universe...SGCverse Buffy was planning on giving Dawn a batch of Ori based Psionic Shields for her own forces....i would assume that it would be posted as a later chapter....hopefully you'll include the SGC universe' part of the story before u post that chapter, especially the events after Buffy's battle with the Ori's forces since that was a big chunk of the story that was left out in the prologue...

anyway thanks again for the update...
Comments from author:
Good idea, but the First has hundreds of slayers guarding her, and Willow. Dawn has... Andrew. I don't think the First has much to worry about physically.
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
I imagined how you would open "Return to Normal" - Buffy in the hospital, which shocks from staff about her injuries. Dawn's escape, just makes sense. Brilliant.
We readers now know, that you have finished your writing. Well done.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bleiddyn
Review:
Sweet! The story's back!

And a good start it is.
Review By [Bleiddyn] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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