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Review of chapter "Three" from HeatherSin
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I have almost no idea what to say about this fic. I like certain elements so far. I like Xander's characterzation , and we aren't really into the Anitaverse canon wise to say anything negative so ... barring the slash-scare in chapter 2, LOL, I think it's on a good track.

Did that sound too condecending? If so then I apoligize. It wasn't my intention.

Looking forward to reading more!

~H
Review By [HeatherSin] • Date [14 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
This is a well written story so far. I haven't read any fanfics with Narcissus in them, but he never seemed to be too much of a villain to me, except for during most of NiC, but then he was being coerced into a lot of his actions there.

I am a bit surprised that Anita didn't take a bigger part in the discussion–it is her house, after all–but otherwise the scene was well done. I laughed at how Xander "apologized" to Tammy. :-)

I'm assuming that Xander was using hyperbole when he said that they were driving almost to Kansas–St. Louis is on the eastern side of Missouri, just across the Mississippi river from Illinois (where Narcissus lives); and Kansas is to the west of Missouri, about 250 miles away. Anita does live out in the sticks, but I don't think she's *that* far away. :-)
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [14 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ashez
Review:
The hyena people are really creepy. And its kind of disheartening to see Xander getting all... brain washed into their cult. Xander should at least be uncomfortably reminded of the time Dracula had him under his thraw and he was eating bugs.

I still think Willow's bound to come looking for him eventually once she gets the report that her "Xander shaped friend" is missing. If you want to make it really feel like he's stuck in the Anita-verse permanetly, I think you need to mention why uber-witch Willow won't be coming to his rescue. An unstable time portal might be enough to slow her down, but Its hard to believe it could foil her from rescuing him permanetly.

*Edit: Editted my review because I changed my mind, didn't realize it would bump it up in the review listing. Whoops.*
Review By [ashez] • Date [14 Feb 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from ashez
Review:
Its cool that you continued this. It's refreshing to read a fic where Xander doesn't suddenly go gay when he gets to the Anita Blake verse. I really hope you follow up on the One Who Sees stuff. I always enjoy when writers follow up on that. I was scared off by the last chapter or anything, just made me feel uneasy. I guess cause the thought of having something inside you that practically forces you to rub up on strangers is grade A freaky to me.
Review By [ashez] • Date [14 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from (Past Donor)LisaF
Review:
I'm really enjoying this. It's a nice change to see this side of Narcissus. Poor Xander, though.
Review By [(Past Donor)LisaF] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from Dragonpink
Review:
So glad you updated...***does a little happy dance*** =^.^=
Review By [Dragonpink] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
This is really an interesting story! I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from silvergaurd
Review:
Interesting fic~ I love the younger looking xander. Can't wait to see more sooN!
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from Chaoskitten
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Nope, not scared off, hell, written any other way and it wouldn't be the narc that we all love.
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from kaleecat
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good to see this updated. As i haven't read but one AB book (didn't like anita, loved nathaniel) it's a little easier for me to buy into the kinder Narcissus. Not that I think s/he will remain that, I think the character is entirely too wacked. However, Xander suddenly 14 again & a were to boot would naturally latch onto what his hyena says is a safe haven. (The entire scene in the clinic closet was stellar). You're presenting a very nice mixture of character development and detail, enough that I can see the AB world clearly. I hope that maybe Xander & Nathaniel can get to know each other, perhaps be friends but Anita seems to type to be threatened by even a 14 year old Xander & would probably pitch a fit.

I'm quite interested to see where this one goes. Glad you updated.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Glad to see more of your story. The plot parts are interesting... I enjoy the characterization parts, too. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Poor Xan
Puberty... again!

BTW: Xan's hyena primal was female.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from slightlyeccentric
Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. I think this is the first fic I've ever read where Narcissus is both well written and not an automatic bad guy. I like your characterization of Xander, it looks like he has become a respected hunter, but hes still a bit of a lovable goof. I can't wait to see more of this, I hope that you update again soon.
Review By [slightlyeccentric] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from LordCorwin
Review:
Nice update .... glad to see it .. and I look forward to reading more.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from toowhiteprincess
Review:
I still can't believe they went to Anita's home. lol. They must really need help.
Review By [toowhiteprincess] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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