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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Almadynis
Review:
Interesting...please continue.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GravyBaby
Review:
Great start! This is one of the few stories like this I have read where Narcissus isn't a complete (or nearly complete) asshole of the first order. Please continue.
Review By [GravyBaby] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bunney
Review:
HUH? Okay wait why isn't there more? this is way too short!

Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus
Review:
Ouch, i have trouble with Hyena!Xander, but nice work so far i guess :/
So he's not only in an alternate dimension, but in the past? Ouch.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ashez
Review:
I don't know if I like Xander being butt-monkeyed by this Narcisisus guy and I was expecting Xander to make some crack about his name like 'Is that your stripper name?' etc etc, but it's still pretty interesting. You've got quite a few good lines here that gives the whole thing a good vibe of being well written. I hope Xander keeps his sarcasm about the Anita-blake verse. I think canon Xander would be really annoyed by a place where vampires were undead citizens. heh.

I don't think he should be giving up quite that quickly either... Willow wouldn't let a little thing like the inner workings of timetravel stop her from rescuing her Xander shaped friend... he might have to wait awhile though.
Review By [ashez] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting so far. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Good start.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Very interesting and hard-boiled. I like how you dramatized that Xander realizes that he's stuck (because any portal unstable enough to deage him would be untraceable in the reverse). Looking forward to more.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from amusewithaview
Review:
Sweet. Love Xander-hyena-ness... and it's cool to read a different take on Narcissus. Most take the route of 'he's a bastard' which I agree with, but this characterization of him makes just as much sense.

Danke, and looking forward to more.
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FohkuKohgeki
Review:
Awesome. I take it Xander's the same age he was when the primal possessed him?

Edit:
Skimmed the other reviews, even younger. You're fucking cruel. :)
Review By [FohkuKohgeki] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bumpkin
Review:
I like the beginning - but that was a nasty bit of a cliff to hang us off of :P Hope to see an update soon.

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from forbin
Review:
Seems fairly similar to another fic that came out recently by zili but I like the way this is coming out.
Please update soon, I'm looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
I've read zili's story, but have to say this is headed in a very different direction than that story is. We've got very different takes on Narcissus for one.
Review By [forbin] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Ooooh... kay

So how old IS Xander anyway?
Comments from author:
Junior high age, or right when all the hormones start to hit like a sledgehammer. Because I was feeling evil enough to play with the younger scoobies theme in that way.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AshJ
Review:
Eek. Okay, so I so didn't see that twist at the end coming but all that it did was make an already fabulous story even *better*. I'm curious to see how you're going to depict Narcissus in this story, and all the weird looks that he was getting make so much more sense now and... aw, heck. It's just *all* great. ^_^
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed. I think Narcissus tends to get portrayed a bit unfairly on TTH at times. Yes, he's weird to the proint of being creepy, and when we first meet him, his goals are different than Anita and friends. But he seems to be respected and liked by his hyenas, and he's trusted by everyone in the coalition enough that his people are guarding the daytime resting place of the Master of the City.

It was one of those cases where I end up writing the story I wanted to read.
Review By [AshJ] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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