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Review of chapter "Two" from Elleria
Review:
Ooooo...update soon please!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from Bumpkin
Review:
"Grandpa?"

::blink:: ... ::blink::

Oh boy... :D!!!

Looking forward to the next part!
keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from Caliadragon
Review:
Oooo... This is so cool! Nick Fury was Xander's Grandpa? I really look forward to seeing what will happen next.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from Thedruid
Review:
Interesting start.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
Did not expect that! I hope you update soon so we can learn what is going on
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from Jiltanith
Review:
Oh, Yay! I've been wanting more of this for a long, long time!!

Please, don't make the wait for the next chapter so long!
Review By [Jiltanith] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
Very intriguing.

Nicely written characters and an intriguing world.

Looking forward to more.

Thanks

Lee
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from grd
Review:
Thank you for resuming this story. "grandpa"!!!?? Please continue this amazing story. Is SHIELD going to try to get Doc Strange to help find Nick?
Review By [grd] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One" from Coldhands
Review:
Want more. Want more NOW. Patience nonexistant. So good. Great even. Need more material so I can have an excuse to recommend it.

Edit a few minutes later:
Sorry, passion took over from logic for a moment. I really like what's there. Everything is so perfect, the language shifts, the battle, Fury's personality driving his actions rather than just the hand of the plot. The only thing I can think of you might do better is the descriptions of the vehicles, I'm having a hard time picturing even the inside where Fury is (which is what we as readers are limited to seeing at this point). You could also describe the speeders, since when I think of that word I always think "Star Wars: Return of the Jedi" speeders.
Review By [Coldhands] • Date [24 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the writer an animé style writer's block smashing mallet::

I have just reread the story.

::Gives the muse a jar of encouragement cookies::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Glares at the nefarious cliffhanger::

I hope we will see you inspired to add more chapters to this story soon.

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
*cringes from glare* I am working on it. It's about half-way done. I'm stuck at a point where Xander has a pretty woman sitting on his lap. I think it's his fault, cause he doesn't want to let her go yet. *grins*
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One" from arkeus
Review:
Very good so far :-)

Your writing really has improved over time!!! :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. As for my writing, thank you again. I also think my style of writing has changed a bit.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [11 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One" from GoddessNyx
Review:
Damn, that has to suck to be him. More please!!!
Comments from author:
Yeah, Fury is not having a good day. *grins* More is coming, honest.
Review By [GoddessNyx] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One" from SamDragon
Review:
Interesting.Fury should get quite a jolt out of the Slayers.
Comments from author:
*grins* Yeah, he should like 'em (or possibly want to kill them...or recruit them) He's dealt with mutants, but they're each unique whereas slayers all get the same basic package. He'd probably think they'd make great agents if they lived long enough to mature (emotionally). Although the first slayer to whine at him about dating troubles will probably get spanked. *chuckles*
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One" from Elleria
Review:
This is really good so far. More as soon as you can please!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Next chapter is being written now.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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