Ooooo...update soon please!

"Grandpa?"

::blink:: ... ::blink::

Oh boy... :D!!!

Looking forward to the next part!
keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect

Oooo... This is so cool! Nick Fury was Xander's Grandpa? I really look forward to seeing what will happen next.


Thanks
Calia

Interesting start.

Did not expect that! I hope you update soon so we can learn what is going on

Oh, Yay! I've been wanting more of this for a long, long time!!

Please, don't make the wait for the next chapter so long!

Very intriguing.

Nicely written characters and an intriguing world.

Looking forward to more.

Thanks

Lee

Thank you for resuming this story. "grandpa"!!!?? Please continue this amazing story. Is SHIELD going to try to get Doc Strange to help find Nick?

Want more. Want more NOW. Patience nonexistant. So good. Great even. Need more material so I can have an excuse to recommend it.

Edit a few minutes later:
Sorry, passion took over from logic for a moment. I really like what's there. Everything is so perfect, the language shifts, the battle, Fury's personality driving his actions rather than just the hand of the plot. The only thing I can think of you might do better is the descriptions of the vehicles, I'm having a hard time picturing even the inside where Fury is (which is what we as readers are limited to seeing at this point). You could also describe the speeders, since when I think of that word I always think "Star Wars: Return of the Jedi" speeders.

::Gives the writer an animé style writer's block smashing mallet::

I have just reread the story.

::Gives the muse a jar of encouragement cookies::

::Glares at the nefarious cliffhanger::

I hope we will see you inspired to add more chapters to this story soon.

::Feeds the plot bunny::

*cringes from glare* I am working on it. It's about half-way done. I'm stuck at a point where Xander has a pretty woman sitting on his lap. I think it's his fault, cause he doesn't want to let her go yet. *grins*

Very good so far :-)

Your writing really has improved over time!!! :-)

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. As for my writing, thank you again. I also think my style of writing has changed a bit.

Damn, that has to suck to be him. More please!!!

Yeah, Fury is not having a good day. *grins* More is coming, honest.

Interesting.Fury should get quite a jolt out of the Slayers.

*grins* Yeah, he should like 'em (or possibly want to kill them...or recruit them) He's dealt with mutants, but they're each unique whereas slayers all get the same basic package. He'd probably think they'd make great agents if they lived long enough to mature (emotionally). Although the first slayer to whine at him about dating troubles will probably get spanked. *chuckles*

This is really good so far. More as soon as you can please!

Thank you. Next chapter is being written now.