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Review of chapter "Main Story" from Rivana
Review:
I made it all the way through to "Slew a cookie monster," before losing control, very loudly. Almost woke my parents. I'd spank you for that, but it was a good laugh. ^^
Review By [Rivana] • Date [20 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Main Story" from glasgowbooklover
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Just read your story and I love it, can't wait till the next part is up.

Keep up the good work

Xb
Review By [glasgowbooklover] • Date [20 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Main Story" from angelkitty
Review:
this is so cool i cant wait to read more hopefully soon
Review By [angelkitty] • Date [20 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Main Story" from Droaerion
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It's great, but after a while there was so much time between the scene changes that nothing made sense. I mean, what happened to Oz? He wasn't mentioned after the poker night. What happens with the whole grand/parent's trying to set up and turn female thing? and the crush on Gibbs? I guess it just seems that after a certain point we have no idea what happens to get there. Did they actually start the consultant company? What happened to being taught by Mac, and wasn't there supposed to be a Shaman brought in? Xander just kinda jumps from there to recognizing Gibbs soul and memories. I like it, but I think if you're going to continue you have to go over some of the gaps first.
Review By [Droaerion] • Date [20 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Main Story" from pyro
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Hey. Am totally loving this story. Very interesting how you are weaving the characters together. An idea for the horse: possibly part phooka. That would explain the hating humans thing, but liking someone part Sidhe.
Review By [pyro] • Date [20 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Main Story" from JaredDrake
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Yo, about the pairing. I haven't read the whole thing but, Xander/Speed? Friendship or Slash fic? If it is Slash, you better post it up somewhere in the summary. Common Courtesy to those that don't like that sort of thing.
Review By [JaredDrake] • Date [19 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Main Story" from Bumpkin
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I really really liked this - you have spun one heck of an AU here. :) I do think that you kinda glossed over some aspects as you added them - mostly stuff that felt you were using them because they were in each series, not because you particularly cared about them - but then seeing how much you did flesh out as you went with some of the actual crossover aspects, just wow. And you don't seem to be finished yet - yay - I can easily read more of this story. :D

Some of the things that you seemed to gloss over I assume are because they are going to be addressed further in later sections of the story - like the reason Faith had the babies, reasons certain characters were introduced at all, a few other things that have totally skipped out of my head at the moment... *g* Eessh, I need to get it together, anyway... I do want to say again, loving this story so far and am going to be looking forward to the next update.

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. But I should reiterate that I'm not writing it in order. I come up with a scene, write it, then place it where it seems to fit.
But I'm glad you like it.
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [19 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Main Story" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
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This is an absolutely amazing fic! I love how you've woven all the characters together even when they live on opposite sides of the east coast. And the former life as a Templar thing is so cool. The development of the story is well done and I look forward to reading more of this story!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. And I'm trying to keep them all interacting, but still doing their jobs so thanks for saying I did it well. Also I'm glad you like the Templar thing. I'm going to have to do more with it. Hope you like future updates.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [19 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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