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Review of chapter "Courtly Behaviour" from Forge
Review:
This remains one of my favorite crossovers of all time. It is respectful to both fandoms and all the characters... oh and it's Wesley. The poor man isn't used nearly often enough in fanfics. I'm no stranger to long breaks having once gone a year between chapters myself, but I do hope this is continued. Wes/ Eowyn sounds great and she hasn't even showed up yet.

Ciao
Review By [Forge] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from GoldenRat
Review:
Great fic. I like how Wesley doesn't end up included in the Fellowship. I always found that to be pretty unlikely when done in other LotR crossovers. Wesley's friendship with Haldir is a surprise, but believably developed. Can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
And I can't wait to find time to write more! Alas, RL ate all my ficcish energy. One day, perhaps, I'll have time to get back into writing fic. Thanks for the review, and I agree re: the Fellowship.
Review By [GoldenRat] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from ElaineRhodes
Review:
I'm just revisting this story. I hope you will continue this someday, and not leave us hanging. I do enjoy your Wesley!
Comments from author:
It's all plotted out to the end, it just has to be fleshed out properly. If I could only find the time, it would make me ecstatic. Seriously.
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [11 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from zafaran
Review:
More, more, please. This is a very interesting and compelling story so far, and I would dearly love to find out what happens in the rest of the story. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters about Wesley's adventures in Middle Earth sometime soon. Keep up the good work.
Zafaran
zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
I wish I could find the time, seriously. One day, I promise I will.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [3 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7: Mirror, mirror on the wall" from EchoElizabeth
Review:
Beautiful! Although, you keep mentioning Dante, which is irritating as I'm reading your story in a procrastination attempt to avoid writing a paper on the Inferno. ^^ Still, Italian poets notwithstanding, your writing is gorgeous and your characterization intriguing. My only complaint is the ease with which Wes picked up the language; is there some reason behind that which you'll explain later? Commonalities or magic of some sort?

Wonderful story, and I look forward to reading the rest of it. ^^
-Echo
Review By [EchoElizabeth] • Date [8 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from purrfus
Review:
Looking for Wesley stories and found this. The story is very well written, and your Wesley is wonderful. I was so sad when I reached the the last chapter and realized you hadn't updated since 2005. Please come back.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [7 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from feuerfliege
Review:
Love this. Please don't let it end here!
Review By [feuerfliege] • Date [14 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from ElfgirlJen
Review:
please update soon
Review By [ElfgirlJen] • Date [13 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3: Up the Axe" from Angrycupcake
Review:
This sounds like a good idea and I really like your version of Wes, but the language thing bugs the hell out of me. I think it almost better if you had just broken down and allowed Wesley to be able to speak the common tongue. I can't suspend my belief enough to believe that Wesley can speak as well to the fellowship as well as you have him doing after a few hours/days. It's not possible no matter how smart and schooled he is. Learning a new language as I'm sure you know takes at least a few months and thats with intense study. Wesley's fluidity issue could have been easily solved if you made mention of the common tongue sounding similar/related to some other language he'd studied.

Besides that I think I like the plot and the direction you're taking the story. Oh and your idea of pairing matched mine. Good or bad I like a variety of ending for a pairing. Constant fairy tale endings bore after a while.
Review By [Angrycupcake] • Date [3 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from BCA
Review:
I love it! Please update soon.
Review By [BCA] • Date [2 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from Arsinoe
Review:
I came back here after a long absence, and was simply delighted to see that you had continued this excellent story! Wesley is a bright and adaptable man, and I have great hopes for him. I loved his friendship with Boromir. Could you not find a way to save Boromir, given the support and advice Wesley helped him with? He could be such a help to the Rohirrim, if nothing else. Anyway, I look forward to future updates and to what you decide for the story.
Review By [Arsinoe] • Date [1 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from websandwhiskers
Review:
I was so happy to see this update! I think I'm beginning to get a glimmering of where you're going to take this, though I will refrain from guessing as I hate when people guess at the plot in reviews .. but I'm excited about it, wherever the story ends up going. I particularly liked the comradery you portrayed between Boromir and Wes .. I like Boromir. Thanks for writing, looking forward to more! :)

-Sonya
Review By [websandwhiskers] • Date [31 Mar 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from ElaineRhodes
Review:
I'm so glad you updated this!
I'm enjoying this story very much - can't wait to see Wes' progress.
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [31 Mar 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from Lorency
Review:
Wesley will find his place. It will be interesting to see when he meets Eowyn.

Peace out
Comments from author:
Interesting doesn't even begin to cover it. He won't know what hit him.

houses
Review By [Lorency] • Date [31 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from Booster
Review:
*happy sigh* Nice to see this fic back. Transitional chapters can be tough, but neccessary, and this worked marvelously. Splitting Wes off from the Fellowship works better for him - and them, but I had enjoyed the relationship he and Boromir had. Hopefully, Wes has changed enough that Boromir will survive? Please? Pretty please?

Good job, houses. More! More!
Comments from author:
Indeed more. I'd like to get it all written at once, but I don't think that's to be. I am working on the next section, however, and hope it turns out well.

houses
Review By [Booster] • Date [31 Mar 05] • Not Rated
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