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Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Dragonelf
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I hope you will get inspired to update this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Crisp::

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Most of the things worth doing in the world had been
declared impossible before they were done.
- Louis D. Brandeis
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Vilkath
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I rather liked this story in many ways and I hope it gets updated again some time. I liked how several girls started to show some interest in Xander, how he had super hotties hitting on him as well as Willow, Dawn and possibly a more interseted Buffy in this story. If it had continued I would wonder where it might be going, far to many stories of this type end of one of two ways. They either have a badly written harem start up, or suddenly Xander finds 'true love' with one girl and basicaly ignores all the others that until that moment seemed to have a real connection with him.

One of my favorite cross overs set in the DC world will always be Terminal Justice, the one dealing with Mr. Black. But I felt that story did what most DC stories do, introduce a bunch of hot girls interseted in a character then just pick one in the end and ignore the previous flirting.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [7 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Godogma
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Thanks to Mythbusters? Mythbusters is full of shit man, proven fact - my whole family bowhunts and we've all split arrows; all it takes is a direct impact on the piece that holds the string on an arrow to split it down the middle. Especially with a broad head, if you're using target points it merely creates a double length warped arrow.

And don't even get me started on what they call detcord or any of their other experiments with explosives. Especially those used by the military; they're all wrong - simply put they either don't use the right materials or have no idea what the hell they're doing. My father was in demolitions and used detcord for everything from cutting roads out of a forest to cutting bridges in half; the idiots on Mythbusters supposedly couldn't even do more than knock needles off an evergreen tree.

I watched that episode, they claimed that was detcord; but one damn thing is for certain it wasn't detcord.

Don't believe everything you see on TV, and especially not anything you see on mythbusters.
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As to the story itself, I enjoy what I've read of it.
Review By [Godogma] • Date [2 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Rubel
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Awesome. Very good job merging the two continuities. I do hope you pick this up again eventually
Review By [Rubel] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Mechconstrictor
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Nice story. Is there a chance that more will come? If so, I hope that Xander gets Cassie.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [1 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Dusel
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Loved this story! Better then your GL one, I liked the first part of it though the second kind of turned me off, personal preferences, ya know? I loved this story though, not the biggest fan of Xander YAHF's, a lot of them have interesting ideas but devolve later on into a bad cliche. Yours is different and I will be re-reading this some more times.

LoL I was really having a WTF face when I reached the end of chapter 11, I was so engrossed that I didn't even notice where I was. That's how good this story is, you start reading and cant stop! I know you're actively writing your GL story so I hope that soon you return to this one! 10 of 10 + a recommendation for this wonderful story!
Review By [Dusel] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from AlecMcDowell
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You know, I love any fic where Xander turns Kryptonian but I really enjoy this take on him as Conner Kent. I like that that puts him with the Titans instead of straight with the Justice League. It'd be interesting to see him meet Conner once he comes back (as far as I remember he does come back in the comics, doesn't he?) Anyways, hope to see more of this some day- preferably with no more Xander/Willow. *shudders* :)
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [4 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from DireSquirrel
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Gotta say, I've enjoyed this. I know it's been a while since it was updated, and might well be abandoned, but I like it. Thanks for what's here.
Review By [DireSquirrel] • Date [19 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Orchamus
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Actually that date shouldn't end well. Him and Willow is just too cliche when he's in the DC universe.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from tactless
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No pressure, but I do hope you come back to this at some point. This story is a pleasure to read.

Thank you.
Review By [tactless] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from superfan
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others had said all I can say about this. So I will say only this "MORE,MUCH MORE"
Review By [superfan] • Date [18 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from MistofRainbows
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Frowns at the who thinks the date is going to end well comment.

Watches the snowball roll in the sunscreen 5000 before jumping into the blast furnace. I'd like to raise my hand but it's never that easy.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [1 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Dragonwolftiger
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OK, I just found this and read it. Just for the record, I always thought that Willow should get Xander. However I think Cassandra (Batgirl) or Megan (Miss Martian) is your best choice. Simpy because they see him for him.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Morgomir
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Love it. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [27 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Ravenel
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It several read throughs, but I finally saw where you were going with the Buffy thing, and I'm seriously impressed. The foreshadowing beforehand was very subtle and very cool. I'm just wondering how it happened at this point. Also wondering what the results of Xander's tests were that Tim ran. Do they show him as half him and half Kryptonian, or half Kon, or did Kon's DNA overwrite his own?
Review By [Ravenel] • Date [18 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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