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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Duskie
Review:
Really like this.
I was hoping it would be Xander/Riddick apposed to Riddick/Xander. Could be really interesting if handled well. Riddick is in a bit of a delicate position being in a whole new world and all that.

I just wish your chapters were a bit longer.
Keep it up.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [8 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bumpkin
Review:
So far this is still looking very very promising, but the chapters are so very very short it's hard to find much to comment on other than that - sorry. Hope to see more, both in the story itself and longer chapters in the future.

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [7 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from HermesAngel
Review:
ok now I'm on the edge of my seat please dont leave me here it hurts on the edge
Review By [HermesAngel] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from purrfus
Review:
Poor Xander.

And your Riddick is just hot enough to turn drool into steam.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from nightslayer
Review:
please don't tell me this is going to be noncon, please!!! other wise a good start.
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AonGealach
Review:
I love this story, and I hope you continue to update with fairly regular updates too!!!
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from FlitShadowflame
Review:
hehehe

nice nod to Riddick/Vaako...I'm not sure if I prefer that to Riddick/Xander or the other way around - suffice to say, I like them both, and if you could work a threeway in here, I'd be positively ecstatic...but even so, I really like this fic so far and hope to see some more soon ^.^
Review By [FlitShadowflame] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Tabee
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story, but I have a question that you might want to clarify soon. How does Xander know Mandarin? In chapter 3 he only recognizes one word, now he can speak in simple sentences?

That doesn't make a whole lot of sense.

Otherwise, yay! for the story :)

Happy writing, update soon please
Review By [Tabee] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Scorpio
Review:
Very nice plot so far. Great characterization of Riddick. You've definitely got his whole 'too cool too care' vibe down. Sorta wondering how Xan knows Mandarin though. More soon please?
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from purrfus
Review:
Interesting development. Nice work with the language barrier.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Almadynis
Review:
Interesting idea, but the character of Riddick seems to be a bit more...Xander-ish than Xan himself is. And Xander is more predetory than normal. Are you doing this on purpose? And you didn't give a time frame for the Buffy-verse. Is it after the 7th season?
Comments from author:
The characters are slightly OOC-ish. But there is a reason for that. And the Buffy-verse timeframe is post season 3 (Road trip era).
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [4 Aug 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from nightslayer
Review:
hmmm. . .me thinks i like!
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [4 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Sajahi
Review:
More please! It's good so far. Please update soon.
Review By [Sajahi] • Date [4 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Jorrie
Review:
XD I don't really have much else to say other than COOL! Can't wait for more. No rush, but I do hope you hurry. I'll be on the look out!
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [4 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from KatHarris
Review:
More please?! I love a good Riddick/Xander tail...

Kat
Review By [KatHarris] • Date [4 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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