Really like this. I was hoping it would be Xander/Riddick apposed to Riddick/Xander. Could be really interesting if handled well. Riddick is in a bit of a delicate position being in a whole new world and all that.
I just wish your chapters were a bit longer. Keep it up.
So far this is still looking very very promising, but the chapters are so very very short it's hard to find much to comment on other than that - sorry. Hope to see more, both in the story itself and longer chapters in the future.
nice nod to Riddick/Vaako...I'm not sure if I prefer that to Riddick/Xander or the other way around - suffice to say, I like them both, and if you could work a threeway in here, I'd be positively ecstatic...but even so, I really like this fic so far and hope to see some more soon ^.^
I'm really enjoying this story, but I have a question that you might want to clarify soon. How does Xander know Mandarin? In chapter 3 he only recognizes one word, now he can speak in simple sentences?
Very nice plot so far. Great characterization of Riddick. You've definitely got his whole 'too cool too care' vibe down. Sorta wondering how Xan knows Mandarin though. More soon please?
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Interesting idea, but the character of Riddick seems to be a bit more...Xander-ish than Xan himself is. And Xander is more predetory than normal. Are you doing this on purpose? And you didn't give a time frame for the Buffy-verse. Is it after the 7th season?
Comments from author:
The characters are slightly OOC-ish. But there is a reason for that. And the Buffy-verse timeframe is post season 3 (Road trip era).
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [4 Aug 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
