Great chapter, but could you maybe put in some translation for the Mandarin. What it means is probably staring me in the face but I don't like to have to think to hard while reading :) Anyways can't wait to read more! more soon please!
Sio~
Review By [Sio] • Date [4 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Very interesting. It's a promising start. I'm curious to see where this leads. I hope you add a new chapter soon. No rush. I'll be on the look out for any updates.
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Interesting start, I look forward to reading more. I have to admit that I was worried when I read your summary and was glad to see the note saying that you had permission for borrowing the idea
Review By [schulyr] • Date [28 Jul 07] • Not Rated