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jupitersdaughterReview:
Very cool, very interesting. Will be keeping eye out for reviews.
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jupitersdaughter] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ObsidianReview:
Very Very good story so far. Please continue.
********* 10 stars
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Obsidian] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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MorriganReview:
I liked it. Neville being bondmate of Harry surprised me first, but soon I started warming up to it ^^
Eagerly awaiting to see where you're going to take this
ta!
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Morrigan] • Date [29 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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LinReview:
I really like the idea..but i don't think that it is believeable. it also feels very rushed.
I don't really have any suggestions as to how to make me believe in this story..but i hope that you can in later chapters because it really is a fantastic idea that i have never seen done before. Please continue to write and improve.
Comments from author:
There's some back story coming that I hope will help with this. I agree it seems a bit rushed, but couldn't figure out how to fix that, thanks for the feedback.
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Lin] • Date [29 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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AriaDragoncrestReview:
Excellent Beginnng.
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AriaDragoncrest] • Date [29 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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VillageOrchidReview:
Some interesting ideas and twists. While I haven't read the spoiler book, a friend couldn't help telling me some of the highlights. I'm enjoying that you have set up a medical mystery which is part of the genre of the House television series.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
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VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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AmethystSiriReview:
Very exciting :) I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters :) please update again soon :)
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AmethystSiri] • Date [29 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
