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Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from jezaeiri
Review:
Lol.

This is good.
Review By [jezaeiri] • Date [31 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Yep, Gibbs is a guy that seems to know everything.

I personal like him to not know about the demons and magic. But nevertheless cool story. Although I don't see Xander and Spike working with each other if they don't have to.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [31 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Generally a nice fic, all the voices sounded right in my head . As already noted you got the age of the 'Captain' wrong and Abby's Doctorate. If you're not in the know its an easy enough mistakes to make, just learn for next time.

However, I don't think Gibbs would have been to Collage. he was a Marine 'other rank' which probably means he joined up straight after High school. He might have attended some courses at a collage before joining NCIS but he's never mentioned anything like that, at least not to my recollection. Really a minor point but it needed to be said.

As I say good fic, but you need to check your details, but don't let us picky so 'n' so's put you off, write more!

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Actually, thanks for letting me know. More than one person has said as much, but you gave me reasons. It's not at the top of my priorities, but i AM going to go in and fix all that at some point.
- D

- And now it's fixed!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [31 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from Infinix
Review:
This was great. Like a really good cookie very glad I tried it but now I want another.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [31 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from Satori
Review:
Well the coroners kinda would have to know, wouldn't they?

Otherwise they'd have a drastically short life expectancy...
Review By [Satori] • Date [31 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from priornavalperson
Review:
Good story, but a Navy Captain might be female and beautiful but not young. Here are what the commissioned officer ranks are in the 4 armed services:

O Grade - Army, Air force, and Marines
o1 1st Lieutenant
o2 2nd Lieutenant
o3 Captain
o4 Major
o5 Lt. Colonel
o6 Colonel
o7 Brigadier General
o8 Major General
o9 Lt. General
o10 General

O grade - Navy and Coast Guard
o1 Ensign
o2 Lieutenant(JG)
o3 Lieutenant
o4 Lt. Commander
o5 Commander
o6 Captain
07 Rear Admiral, lower half
o8 Rear Admiral, upper half
o9 Vice Admiral
o10 Admiral

O Grade-Army during a World War
o11 General of the Army

O Grade - Air Force during a World War
o11 General of the Air Force

O Grade - Navy during a world war
o11 Fleet Admiral

Your beautiful turned officer would most likely have been a Lieutenant or Lieutenant(JG)
Comments from author:
Lieutenant it is!
- D
Review By [priornavalperson] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from Tegasus
Review:
That was really cute! Thanks for posting it! ^_^
Review By [Tegasus] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Nice little story with some very good characterizations and dialog. I wonder what really went on in that Convention? Hint, hint. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from purrfus
Review:
Fun. NCIS can be a tricky cross over and this is good.

2 things - both about rank/title.

Captain is nice, but it really needs to specify which branch.

According to CBS.com/NCIS employee assessment file, Abby's highest degree is a Master's in Criminology and Forensic Science.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from JoeB
Review:
Great Story. It's fun when everyone is in on it, but doesn't tell each other.

One thing. Identify the service branch that your vic belongs to. Capitan in anything but the navy works. Capitan in the navy is equivalent of Colonel in any other branch.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from Obsidian
Review:
whoops didn't mean to post twice.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from Obsidian
Review:
very well done. I like it!
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Don't quite get the reference to the corner's convention -- but it makes sense, and you're consistant about it. Thanks for sharing the tale.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vampire 101" from (Past Donor)renatria
Review:
SQUEEE This is the first time I've ever had someone respond to one of my challenges! Thank you! And Gibbs was great, he always knows what's going on.
Review By [(Past Donor)renatria] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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