Review of chapter "Chapter 17: Gathering Momentum" from Gideon
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Good to see Harry's patience bearing fruit as things slowly change course. He really does need a chance to talk to Sirius though. With what future knowledge Sirius has there is a lot he could do if he thinks he is still alone in what he knows. Such an uncontrolled reaction could be dangerous for Harry even if somethings would be helpful too, like not having to stay with the Dursleys.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: Gathering Momentum" from Elleria
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Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: Gathering Momentum" from ChaosLady
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What an evil, evil cliffhanger! You better update soon! If you don't update for months and months after a chapter like that, I'm going to be very upset! Loved the chapter though.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: Gathering Momentum" from AbscondingCascade
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YES! An update, thank you for this. And so in thanks for this ~ www.youtube.com/watch?v=8mV73bsM870
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: Gathering Momentum" from Bobboky
Review of chapter "Chapter 16: Fresh Perspectives" from Elleria
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Very happy to see an update. Love this story.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16: Fresh Perspectives" from Albino
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Great story
Do normally follow it on Fanfiction net and was surprised to find it here.
Keep the chapters coming!!
Review By [Albino] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16: Fresh Perspectives" from Callista
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Thanks for updating, I love this story sooo much!
Cally
Review By [Callista] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16: Fresh Perspectives" from sdavidm
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Great to see this chapter! Harry will no doubt have a hard time of it being 11 years old, but I can definitely see the changes his more subtle decisions will have. Like the brilliant application of the naming charm! Not clear if there's a defence against that though. It would seem like a very important charm given the existence of polyjuice and glamours, but then you'd think Dumbledore would use it all the time.
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: Progress Report" from VillageOrchid
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Not a bad partial result. The peer-to-peer mentoring with bits from experienced adults, pretty cool, too.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: Sharing the Load" from VillageOrchid
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Yes, well this version of Hermione is definitely one who hasn't watched Doctor Who much if at all. Good stuff, complicated plot and character stuff. Thanks for continuing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: Responsibility to Act" from VillageOrchid
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Oh, if the reason that Lupin has been having his dreams is on Harry's theory than Sirius would be having them, too. Very well done chapter with lots of new territory.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Unexpected Revelations" from VillageOrchid
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Now that is quite a bit of acceleration, in a good way.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Cheese
