Well, after what she's been through, it is sort of hard to blame her, poor thing.
Comments from author:
I try to have reasonable reactions to things in my stories.
And I'm trying to write Buffy in a way that isn't badBuffy, or completely unBuffy-like Buffy. I want a Buffy that feels like Buffy, and is at least somewhat sympathetic. Even if all is not well.
Review of chapter "Ugly Revelations" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
"I'm not dealing with this again. I can't go through it, not again," Buffy lurched to her feet, the world feeling out of focus and off balance around her.
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Ouch. Buffy's been burned too often to believe it'll work out, and Michael just wants to stay human. Sounds like things'll be kind of messy for awhile.
Comments from author:
Things often get messy. At least this is a plausible messy, rather than a sudden makes no sense for the characters to act like that plot twist. And it IS an actual problem, even if Buffy is taking the problem and running to one type of ugly conclusion.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Intriguing. There is a dearth of Buffy/ lost boys crossovers stories. I'm excited to discover another one. However , Willow hasn't been mentioned or seen a lot. Does that mean she is dating David?
Review By [Tally] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost the Laughter" from dharkcharlotte
Review:
Very very interesting! I always thought the way David 'died' was bogus. Antlers are NOT made of wood. Good job so far!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
While I certainly won't say that only wood will kill a vampire, I thought it was rather odd that David's body was still very much intact, aside from having a pair of horns going completely through him. With a vampire, how can you tell if they're unconscious, asleep, faking it, or... well, how can you be sure that a vampire's dead if the body's still there?
Review By [dharkcharlotte] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost the Laughter" from Sweetdoggie
Review:
Good story. Nice crossover. I always thought that the ending of Lost Boys was just a little too slick. Can't wait for more of this.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I've done several fanfics now that take the idea that perhaps antelope horns weren't quite as fatal to vampires as they thought in the movie... Though even if they didn't kill him, they certainly must have dropped him for a while.
Review By [Sweetdoggie] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost the Laughter" from Fyrloche
Review:
I always liked 'The Lost Boys' and this fic is very good. I look forward to the rest of it.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review By [Sky] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost the Laughter" from heathenseyes
Review:
Interesting. Looking forwards to the next part. It's really horrible, but I have to admit that while I loved Michael(mainly 'cause he was just so pretty), I really loved David as well. But I am looking forwards to seeing Michael and Buffy together. They'd make a good match, plus, he'd also fit in pretty well.
Thank you for posting and I hope to see more soon.
:)
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [31 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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