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Review of chapter "Confrontation" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Just found this story and hope it's not dead. Nice one you've got here.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I've hit a road block and contemplating rewriting several parts.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confrontation" from Dragonelf
Review:
Excellent story so far and I hope you will get inspired to add more chapters to the story.

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
Thank you. Has not been forgotten. I've been watching the main story though for more ideas as to characters and events. Nice to see that the judge for example did seek to be on the Supreme Court. The true master story is where I draw inspiration from.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confrontation" from lorwen
Review:
Needs More Please
Review By [lorwen] • Date [26 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cleveland bound" from Pags
Review:
nice story :) want to se more ebil xander tho ^^
Review By [Pags] • Date [18 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On the Road" from JoeDineen
Review:
Looks like building up for a showdown in Cleveland. I look forward to more.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Resistance" from CPTSkip
Review:
Hummm. It seems Faith is strong with the Force in this time-line. But it also seems she is already biased toward the Dark Side. Interesting to see SW Imperial tech go up against late 20th Century Russian tech. I look forward to more of your disturbing story. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Resistance" from Thewander
Review:
Great job, really loving this. too bad Faith got away, I could see her being the Hand (like Mara Jade) and having it out with Buffy, also I just a side thing, How would good George Lucas react to seeing his ideals made into real things. law suit maybe? just an ideal. keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Remember George was killed by Xander in the Jedi Harris storyline, it's also been mentioned in earlier chapters. Faith's story is surprising as I originally didn't think about including her. Thank you.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [12 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Resistance" from JoeDineen
Review:
Faith a Jedi, cool, I wonder are all potential also potential Jedi?
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [12 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hope" from CPTSkip
Review:
Well, this was a really cool update. It is nice to see Giles Forcefully kicking robotic butts. Now, I hope all the good guys can get their acts together and take out the Emperor, I mean Dark Xander.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the kind words.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plans" from Cali
Review:
Personally I like the Terran Jedi and Jedi Harris stories better. No offense, but I like the writing a bit better and your storyline is a bit choppy like my attempts at writing. Get one or more people to act as a beta for a story first before you post. Also you can bounce your ideas off one or more people to flesh out the storyline. If you want you can even send me a couple of ideas. I'll try and help you if I can. Good Luck and happy hunting.
Comments from author:
I agree too, scribbler has a talent of writing scenes that I envy. He makes writing a 10,000 word chapter seem easy. I started this as not only tribute to scribbler but a way to channel certain negative issues that have happened in RL into more creative outlets. Thank you for the offer and don't be surprised if you get something from me. Thank you.
Review By [Cali] • Date [12 Aug 07] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Development" from satsuma
Review:
SCHULER? Sounds very familiar. That name, where did I hear it from? Hmmm. Anyway great story. Its good to see the normal soldiers of America invoved, at least i think they weren't clones?
And the Chicken and Crate, hilarious!
Comments from author:
Schuler is from a co-worker of mine, thought the name fit nicely. As for the troops, I'll try to make sure I do a better job differentiating between clone troopers and regular troops.
Review By [satsuma] • Date [9 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unwelcome Visitor" from DevJannz
Review:
You accidentally posted the same chapter as number 9.

edit:

Ahh, I see the prologue now. Sorry.
Comments from author:
I added a prologue and moved it to the beginning. Thats why Chapter 9 became 10.
Review By [DevJannz] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lessons" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Cool update. Thanks for a bit of comedic relief.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lessons" from JoeDineen
Review:
Loved the training of Giles chapter, Travers is as arrogant as ever. I look forward to more.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lessons" from Inquisitor
Review:
wow...Giles a Jedi Knight...is there any chance Anakin would return with him in hopes of atoning himself for what he did on Haloween night...

also the SGC got the TER(Transphase Eradication Rod) from the Tokra in Season2Eps20...

the only thing to make this story interesting is how Darth Mortallis would handle the assasination attempts of the Terakan Order...

as for invading Afghanistan, it would be like the Polish army against the German Panzer tanks...only in this story it would be the Taliban forces on horses against AT-AT&STs...
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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