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Review of chapter "Lost Rebels" from CPTSkip
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I am liking your story more and more. Where, oh where, is Giles? I hope you don't let Xander make the standard Evil Overlord's mistakes. After all, as an ex-SF geek I'm sure he has read the whole list. Lol! I think it would be interesting for the Dark Lord to act like a noble leader until most mundane Americans are on his side. Of course the Rebel Alliance could always use help from the Demonic Side of the Force. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost Rebels" from Inquisitor
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thanks for the quick updates...now things starts to get really interesting...the nerd squad's rebel alliance actually exists&had been going active for 2yrs expecting for the actual Order66 to happen...

wonder how they're going to equip Buffy so that she can handle the Siths...Oz can still be turned back to the light side...i'm surprised he just hasn't blew a hole where his control chip was located&let his werewolf's regenerative powers repair the damage...then again he might be waiting his time since it would obviously be detected if the device goes missing...

it would be interesting how Warren's terminators are compared to the Stormtroopers...i think the first thing that the rebel alliance should do is to secretly capture one of Harris' manufacturing plants to mass produce the terminators...best thing to do is use magic to contain any communication within the manufacturing plant from reaching Darth Mortallis...

hopefully Cordelia's experience as a Scooby from the Jedi Harris timeline would be really beneficial...i think they should get a wraith to go after him but if Cordy can get a vengeance demon to grant her wish again, then all of this would be quickly taken care of...
Comments from author:
Cordy living and her experience is my humble token of appreciation to Scribbler's vision. Getting another wish would just spoil the story though. Personally I think D'Hoffryn would be getting a great kick out of this mad world. Anya's probably being rewarded with a promotion. And all vengeance demons are prohibited from interfering in this world. Thank you for your review, my muse is going nuts this weekend, so we'll see how many chapters appear.
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angel of Cleveland" from Inquisitor
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thanks for the update but wasn't it Senator Kealty&not Kinsey who supported Harris. Kealty was the one u mentioned in the earlier chapter as being the new president. I would had guessed that Kinsey would had been taken out since he's involved with the NID&Kealty wouldn't want to share his power...
Comments from author:
Kinsey was the Senator I really meant to use, hence the correction. While an Edward Kealty did exist in the SG1 verse too but was not as bad as Robert Kinsey. If ever there was a stereotypical politician, Kinsey was it.
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [4 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "P3X-1279" from JoeDineen
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well written but depressing, Very hard to see how Dart Mortalis can loose, Buffy, Willow and Giles are dead, the SGC is cut off from earth and has no spaceships. At least nothing that can take on a star destroyer. There is no equivalent of Luke, Yoda or Obi Wan out there. I cannot see any happy ending. Thus I am quite intrigued.
Comments from author:
Giles fate is still unknown. Buffy is NOT dead. Remember she did not go to Sunnydale in the verse.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [4 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from Alltorian
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Great updates. This is the most entertaining SW crossover i have read since the Jedi Harris itself. Will there be actual combat scenes in the upcoming chapters? I look forward to finding out.
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [3 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from DevJannz
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I am really enjoying this story so far (oddly enough, not usually a fan of evil Xander). I am interested in finding out what happened to the rest of the gang from Sunnydale. Hopefully we will see that soon. Good work so far.
Review By [DevJannz] • Date [3 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from Guardian
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Who the hell is Kealty? An original character or you just didn't know how to write "Kinsey"? Senator Robert Kinsey is the political "bad guy and pain in the ass" in the SG1 show and gets mentioned in Scribbler's fanfics (no direct interaction with the folks there as far as I know).
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robert_Kinsey
Comments from author:
Thank you for that obvious correction, and I've changed it. Their was a Senator Ed Kealty but you were correct in that I meant Robert Kinsey. Thank you for pointing that out and I've corrected the chapters.
Review By [Guardian] • Date [3 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from Inquisitor
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i appreaciate the quick updates...there wasn't a prologue to explain what went different from the OTL of Jedi Harris...did the SGC actually arrive in Sunnydale&realized that they couldn't win&took measures of their own to make sure that Harris doesn't backstab them in the future...is the SGC's noninvolvement there for a reason so that they can keep the tech that they reverse engineered from Harris' kept secret...it's obvious that Carter would had wanted to understand the tech&maybe develop their own version of the tech used since it did came from an NID supported research program...

also the TER used against Anubis' Kull warriors should be able to kill the clones even with their stormtrooper armour on...plus it's not a beam weapon that can be deflected back by a lightsaber...it's actually a weblike energy emission...guess they have to use something against a personnel shield though...
Comments from author:
I was hoping the 2nd chapter hinted at one of the major changes to the original. Harry Maybourne did not go alone to investigate the Initiative and with Robert Kinsey's involvement, history changed. There was no message to SG1 to come to Sunnydale. Without SG1 to accompany the White Hats in their attack, the odds of success fell dramatically. As for Giles' fate, that has yet to be decided as what happens with his confrontation with Anyanka.

I checked the timeline for SG1 and for 1999 it would be around Season 3, but I'm making SG1 around Season 2. Rather than Anubis, it will be Apophis's forces that SG1 will be contending with. The TER device first appeared in Season 2. I will have to study more of the SG1 verse and see how much changed there too. Thank you.
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [3 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Council in hiding" from CPTSkip
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Your story is just ... neat. Neat in the sense of total nightmare of course. Lol! I look forward to more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise" from CPTSkip
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Hummm. Nice action scene. I hope there is someone who can eventually take the Dark Lord out as I don't like seeing the Bad Guys win. But I'll hang in there because I like the way you write.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the kind words. I'm hoping to do some justice to the many talented authors here especially Scribbler. More research and thought into future chapters as while I know BTVS, SG1 verse is an area I must tread carefully. Love the way Scribbler has incorporated the two almost seamlessly.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise" from Alltorian
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Good story. I love evil Xander stories. Are your clone troopers modeled on the Jango Fett clones from the prequels? Because they were good at their jobs, and storm troopers don't seem to do anything but die. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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