Wow, this has the makings of a really awsome story and quite frankly I wouldn't mind reading more in fact I would love to read more so please continue it.
If Dawn controls what age she appears does that mean she's immortal? So how old will they be by the book times?
Comments from author:
Nice one! You caught that! See, if Xander is immortal, I didn't want Dawn to die on him, and I really really didn't want to make her a vampire. This way since she can change her age at will, age doesn't mean much for her. *pat head* What a clever girl (?). Here's a cookie.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love this story. I'm anxiously waiting for Xander and Dawn to meet the AB gang, especially Jean-Claude and Asher. They will be 4,500 years old by the time they get to meet them! Sweet.
Omg!! you're back! I can't believe it,Please please please update more,Brown eyed stray has always been one of my favs...and it isn't even finished yet,lol. Can't wait for more of this fic either!
Review By [Darkhime] • Date [22 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Days Gone By" from calileane
Review:
I didn't see the 'time difference' coming ^^
I can't seem to find words to tell how much I loved that particular cliffhanger and it's results. Nor how the first vampire meeting being with the Traveler made it all perfect.
I'm curious to see who will be turned and what will happen to them. And also it seems the time will be long before they come to be in Anita's time, I would love to read more about their lives in the time line of the world.
I love your story.
Review By [calileane] • Date [19 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Days Gone By" from DannyMasters
Review:
I love it!!! this is a good plot so far! Keep up the great work!!
Review By [DannyMasters] • Date [19 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Days Gone By" from LordCorwin
Review:
very good. :)
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Days Gone By" from Chickalupe
Review:
Can I tell you how happy this makes me? The more I think on it, the more I truly enjoy the idea of Xander and Dawn in Ancient Anita-Verse being worshiped as gods. I mean, really love it! I can't wait to see what happens as they live through the centuries. I like that it took awhile for Xan to give into the Traveler's advances, but that he gave in eventually! I'm really excited for where you might go with this. Keep up the great work!
Review By [Chickalupe] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated