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Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Damn, I always had a soft spot for Vi. Good ending anyway.

Forgot to say that you might want to give a credit to H.P. Lovecraft, who wrote the original Cthulhu Mythos stories.
Comments from author:
Ooops! Credit everyone except the original Author, I shall remedy that soonest!

All the best,

DaveT.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [17 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from CPTSkip
Review:
Well, that was just terrific. You made me laugh and sometimes nearly cry. You have a real talent for dialog that sounds like the 'real' character is saying it and yet is often hilarious. If Buffy doesn't want to 'turn gay' maybe she should talk to Faith about sharing Xander. If the poor boy lived through the heart attack of being asked to go out with two Slayers at once of course. Lol! I look forward to your next installment with much anticipation. Maybe you could do a story dealing with some of Xander's and Faith's adventures? And what is with Kennedy's mom/stepmom?
Comments from author:
All Kennedy's back story will be revealed over the next couple of stories...I think it'll be worth the wait and I shall drag it out as long as possible!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from JoeDineen
Review:
So Hecate with a hangover, I take Bilious was off duty? Willow is lucky that 4 major war goddesses are on her side. I wonder what Freya's position as a Norse war goddess (and sex goddess) and head of the Valkyrie. Buffy is on scene and immense hordes of black helicopters following up.
Comments from author:
It does seem a little unfare doesn't it.

The end is nigh...well tomorrow actually.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from CPTSkip
Review:
Holy Hanna! Your story is getting a bit tense. Athena was always my favorite goddess and it is nice to see her on the Slayers' side. And yet you still can make me shoot Mt. Dew out my nose when I read certain lines. Like: “No,” Said Willow, “I’d thought I’d use my ‘cell’.” For some reason this just made me laugh out loud. You know, the Slayers really do need to get the President on their Friends and Family Calling Plan. It would have been so much easier if they could have asked her to have the Air Force drop a fuel-air bomb on these MoFos. Lol!
Comments from author:
Ah! But bombing them wouldn't be so much fun! And can you imagine the phone call?
"Um Madam President? i wonder if we could borrow the Air Force for a little while?"

Glad you're still enjoying, last part on friday.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Mcspender
Review:
Axes flash, broadsword swing, shining armour's piercing ring
Horses run with polished shield, fight those bastards till they yield
Midnight mare and blood red roan, fight to keep this land your own
Sound the horn and call the cry, how many of them can we make die?
Rest well Tina, you have earned it.

Hell dude, that was heavy, both in the combat scenes and the scenes between Kennedy & Jack.
By the way, are you gonna do the thing about the baby being a male slayer?That would be cool =).

Excellent pair of chapters.!!

See ya!!
Comments from author:
I think you will be surprised about how I end this series. My idea's are not fully formed yet but I'm getting there!

Last two chapters on Friday (I hope if my home connection is up and running!).

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Cutiepie
Review:
Hey, have you ever played "Arkham Horror"? You'd love it! All this rising terror levels and insane cultists. Great stuff. I just read and grin the whole way through each update. Honestly, who would be insane enough in the beginning to even want to be a cultist like this? They must just come by the insanity naturally, I would think. I may have to get my husband to read the story, since he has been a Lovecraft fan for years. You realize that you getting a swelled up head from praise is supposed to give your muse just that much more room to work, right? =]
Comments from author:
Hadn't thought of swelled heads in quite that way before. Thank you.

I have to admit that anyone wanting to raise Cthulhu OF THEIR OWN FREE WILL would have to be insane to begin with. But you can usually talk a certain type of person into anything if you offer them power and riches beyond the dreams of averist!

More tomorrow.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [14 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
Review:
Damn, the sheriff and his men would have been handy in the upcoming fight... but they might have been killed, so, it's better for them this way.
I suppose that Rupert & Sylvester are gonna watch Kennedy and Tara, good.
About the back up, why don't you use some of the ships of the line: The Odyssey or the Daedalus? They can bomb the place from orbit or transport the cult members to the lake... the lake's surface, not the bottom of it... I'm not that merciless =P.

Excellent chapters!

See ya!!
Comments from author:
As I'm basically ignoring the Ori storyline I've assumed that all the (very limited) SG assets are still chasing down Goa'uld. Plus bombing them from orbit would be too easy!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from JoeDineen
Review:
So the brave investigators cut off from reinforcements head off to face the mad cultists.
Comments from author:
Well that's what me an' my friends used to end up doing when we were play CofC!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from CPTSkip
Review:
Ahhh! More DaveT goodness. What a lovely way to start a Monday morning. I love the little things you keep throwing in. Like: Within moments Jack had drifted off to that happy place he went to when Sam started to lecture. And the way Jack almost said "Homeworld Security". Lol! I do wonder if they could have used the Sheriff and his men to take out the cultists. Loved the way the individual Slayers all slay differently. Thank you for updating so regularly.
Comments from author:
Not a problem updating when you wrote the story a couple of months ago!

The 'happy place' thing is a little trick I use to stop myself from having to write loads of boring tech jargon! Maw-Ha-Ha!

As for the Sheriff and his men...well they could have ended up turning on the girls (from no fault of their own) Cthulhu can drive people nuts real easy!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Moderator)Kiwikatipo
Review:
1) How many of these songs have you got? One for each chapter?

2)'“Yeah okay.” Agreed Frank, he was really disappointed (in more ways than one), he did not often get to go out with pretty girls like Tammy, and then sacrifice them!'

cracked me up

3)"Jack watched in horror as two girls picked the body up, seemingly with no effort and carried it into the house. Another girl appeared with a couple of buckets of water that smelled strongly of bleach and started to wash the evidence from the path. Jack started to protest, but Sam pulled on his arm and led him back into the house"

Hah, that wouldn't matter to the detectives of Law and Order Criminal Investigation Unit, they'd have the truth out of Tammy in no time.

4)++++++++++++++++++

feeling a little arty, hmm?
Comments from author:
There is a thing called the 'Cthulhu Hymnal' which gets a credit at the end of the story.

The thing with the bleach; I know it only cleans away the blood and it still shows up with that squirty stuff they use. But hey, this is just a 'hick' Sheriffs Department here.

Thanks so much for all three of your reviews...my head is in grave peril of exploding its getting so big...not really.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)Kiwikatipo] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from (Moderator)Kiwikatipo
Review:
1)Another hilarious intro song.

2)"That depends,” Shannon stopped for a moment to drink from her canteen, “If this is some sort of perverted fetish, then yes it is unusual.”

I honestly think these sentences where people perform actions rather than reply,say,suggest, explain or answer, move the story along more.

3)"They had left Rupert the Bearbot sunning himself in a deck chair on the jetty with Sylvester curled up next to him. Now they were nowhere to be seen."

So cute and adorable the image and now worry strikes me that Rupert and Sylvester might be in peril.

4)“What’s with the ‘paleface’ thing?” Replied Shannon as she started to circle the Spirit, “That sounds like ‘racial profiling’ to me,”

That's a good line, made me chuckle.
Review By [(Moderator)Kiwikatipo] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Moderator)Kiwikatipo
Review:
Nice Song at begining, suggestion - maybe italicise it for added class.

Mean but funny build up, I thought Billy Bob and Cletus were going to be eaten by a Cuthlu demon but no.

Anthony Hart reminds me of that guy from Close Encounters making his mountian out of mashed potato.

Kennedy's encounter with the statue in the store is a nice set up.

I like the glamour, because it seems in Btvs that anyone can work magic, your strength in it depends on how far you are prepared to go and some people inheirit enhanced magical abilities eg Amy and her mother.
Review By [(Moderator)Kiwikatipo] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Moderator)acs
Review:
Another delightful story and chapter. Where do you come up with all of the good ideas? Oh, and the execution. Good ideas only become good stories with good story telling/execution (And not just of Evil Park Rangers).

Poor Tammy.

Does that mean the peeping Toms have True Evil Tendencies also or is it just their father who is on the Evil World Domination Tour?
Comments from author:
Thank you for your comments.
Where do I come up with the idea's? I don't know they just pop into my mind.

One day Tammy will get a boyfriend who isn't evil, or a demon.

As for evil tendencies you'll have to wait till the end.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [10 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from WolfWriter
Review:
Someone didn't do the required reading, did he? Doesn't this doofus know that indulging in maniacal laughter will only lead to his demise?

The one thing I don't get about villains is their inherent stupidity. Doesn't anyone read the 'Evil Overlord list of things NOT to do'?

Evidently, this guy missed the boat.

I like the story, though, it's funny.

Where did the Bearbot come from? Or Sylvester, for that matter?
Comments from author:
Rupert the Bearbot and Sylvester are continuing characters from The Seattle Slayers series.

Rupert was built by Willow as a guardian/playmate for her daughter Tara.

Sylvester is the same Sylvester from the old cartoons(it's a long story, see 'Fighting for Strangers').

One day I'm going to write a fic based around those rules...trouble is if you start to follow them you stop being really evil. And of course most of the villains in this fic are quite, quite MAD!!!!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [10 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
Is Tammy a long lost relative of Xander? Or just a potential girlfriend ;)

About halfway through I started wondering how to pronounce Cthulhu. Being part of life the universe and everything, I figured (correctly) that Wikipedia would have the answer - Kathooloo - and inadvertently discovered what I shall enshrine as the useless fact of the day: Apparently Dr. Zoidberg (Futurama) is a officially descendant of Cthulhu!
Comments from author:
That's how I've always pronounced it. You should have heard the other versions I've heard over the years. It's enough to make the Great One wake-up and take notice!

I can believe that of Zoidberg.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [10 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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